Fifty Words for Embarrassment - Comments

Whoops, dang Mibba made me accidentally post the comment when I wasn't even done!
Anywho, you've got a piece of work on your hands. I love how I can relate to the characters. Everything flows so nicely in your story. Good job!

Comment swap~

First off, your layout is adorable. The picture is so cute.
I like how you've written this. The summary drew me instantly

I really like the way you narrate the story and the characters are very likable. I agree with Marian that a summary might be nice, though, to get the readers attention more easily. I think I´ll really like this story and I hope you update soon (:

Dear author, you just got yourself a new subscriber. :) An interesting and fitting summary is needed though to pull your readers in. The dercriptions were rather flowy and the characters are brought up nicely enough. It's strange how the comment swap feature has given me great stories the last few days. Anyway, you are off to a great start and I'm waiting for more. ~Marian.

Dear author, you just got yourself a new subscriber. :) An interesting and fitting summary is needed though to pull your readers in. The dercriptions were rather flowy and the characters are brought up nicely enough. It's strange how the comment swap feature has given me great stories the last few days. Anyway, you are off to a great start and I'm waiting for more. ~Marian.

I came here from the Comment Swap! You're actually really good. I like your characters. I think they are well drawn and believable. I might hold a special place for the Reed character because my boyfriend's name is Reid as well! I am usually not too into these teenage drama/romance stories but I want to see more of your work so I am subscribing. Good job!

Love. This. So. Much.

I really like this story. I hope you update soon :)