Carry On - Comments

This story is just so heart-wrenching. I constantly am checking for updates, its on my mind continuously throughout the day!

I just caught up and all I can say is that I love this soooo much! It's so intense and so REAL, like...I feel her pain and I'm heartbroken and frustrated for her. I can't wait for more.

love this please update soon like right now

<333 yaaay up-dates! =) Wooow!! Matt was being nice!?!?! o.O Up-date again soon, can't wait to see what's going to happen next.

oh my god, this story is absolutely intense and heart-breaking. It's amazing and breathtaking

So lets all just tear our hearts out because this story is goign to do it for us anyways. I hate how I can relate to her. And I understand so much that hearing "someone has it worse than you," is just not fair. I remember when my friend's parents told me that, it just made me feel worse. It's like adding one more problem on to your plate. I just wish Brian would take his head out of his ass.

oh my god! this is so intense, I'm bawling. Cannot waait for the next update

#speechless!!!!!! i feel bad for liza because brian still doesnt understand her well nobody does even after she tried to kill herself, there all in denial. BUT I'm glad that she at least has zacky :)

Ugh, Brians denial is painful.

:( this chapter ripped my heart out. I can't believe how harsh Brian was. Poor Liza...

Aw poor liza. Cant wait for next chapter.

She finally tried to end her life and what really pushed her over the edge this time was Brian. He overreacted because she performed her own piece instead of what was told of her. He should be proud of his daughter's creativity, but instead he is angry with her and now he should feel beyond terrible that he caused her to hurt herself. I hope that you update very soon because I am really looking forward to what is going to happen next.

@ Trinasaurus
Because this is probably a terrible chapter to leave off on, I'm going to update again later. I'm going to reread it again and do some editing before posting.

Just clearing things up, the 'Yay! :D' was to do with what @ Mockingbird;; said in reply to my question, not in Liza trying to kill herself. O.o
Also, please update again!!! Or I'm going to go insane.

Yay! :D

@ Trinasaurus
Because the entire story is already written, I update pretty often. Once a day and sometimes twice. All I do before I update I go back and edit or add more details.

Just curious, but how often do you update this story?

Oh and I forgot ! Brian, why? Why are you reacting like this ? They're so alike it' frustrating sometimes.
Another important point, you're slowly introducing us to another thing that's bugging Liz : she doesn't want to be compared to her father. She's claiming her own identity. She's Liza Haner, not Brian Haner's daughter. Must be one of the many reasons she's pissed off by his simple presence. It's quite understandable but she's too learn that YES she's her own person but that is not necessarily Brian's entire fault and she can't deny the father who has been there.
You're right, sometimes we see that she's been spoiled and all.

Oh (too much "oh" sorry :')) the two of them they use drugs/alcohol to drown their problems. And they blame themselves all the time. So I'm gonna say once again : Liza and Brian, you really are related.

There's so much pressure on her shoulders, it's unbelievable and it's suffocating her. She might act like she doesn't care anymore but it's just a mask to disguise that deeply inside she DOES care. The "i dont care anymore" is like a shield.
Zacky's lecture is so touching, I really loved all the parallels. OH and !! When Brian talks to her and says that it isn't her fault but his...I was so overwhelmed with emotions. I just wanted to hug them both and hit them then hug them. For once, he was trying to open-up and he apologized for what he did. That was a really good passage.
And the present...awe. And what's amazing is that Zacky really embodies tenderness, something she really needs. Plus he never forgets to remind her she's loved, that her father would do anything for her.

Everything's realistic because you're taking your time, you're not rushing everything ; we all know that such a process can only be slow.
Can't wait for more :)

Fucking Brian >:(