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  • KellShadows

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    Love the story so far, I hope you up-date again soon. I'm dying to see what's going to happen next! =)
    February 23rd, 2013 at 09:02am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Loved the gift from Zacky and Gena! Ugh! I don't know why Syn can't just be happy that she's creative and skilled. That's irritating.
    February 23rd, 2013 at 08:23am
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    Uh oh! I bet he's pissed because she did g take it seriously or something. I dunno. It made me sad when she had a panic attack and passed out. This story just plays on my heart strings. It's really well written too! Oh, and Zacky's gift was so sweet!
    February 23rd, 2013 at 06:46am
  • JulyGirl

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    This chapter was great! I'm looking forward to more :)
    February 23rd, 2013 at 05:28am
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    great update cant wait for the next :)
    February 23rd, 2013 at 05:11am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    I almost teared up when I read Zacky's..."lecture." It was sweet. But I think SevenfoldGirl is right: they don't understand how much pressure they put on her. It doesn't matter that she knows how much they love her and they only want the best for her, it's still hard when someone expects you to be SO perfect and live up to them and what they've done. And jeez, I'm nervous FOR her over the concert. Update soon, please!
    February 22nd, 2013 at 03:40am
  • YourVengeance

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    bring it on!!!! hahhahaha but im excited for the next two chapters!!! can't wait to see what happens at the concert, and how her dad will react :)
    February 21st, 2013 at 11:49pm
  • Norman Reedus

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    These two last chapters where great, I love how Zacky's being calm about it and trying to get her to understand but I don't think anyone realizes what kind of pressure she must feel from everyone. They expect her to be an adult yet they can't treat her like one.
    I'm in love with this story- updaaaaaatteeee
    February 21st, 2013 at 10:26pm
  • Felicity Smoak

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    I really enjoy reading your story! It's much different from any others father/daughter stories I've read and I like the way you write! Keep it up :D
    February 21st, 2013 at 10:24pm
  • Ritha

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    please update soon <3 you're a really good writer c:
    February 21st, 2013 at 01:57pm
  • YourVengeance

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    i fall in love with this story more and more each time you update!!! im glad that zacky finally said something to her about her problems..
    February 21st, 2013 at 06:57am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Okay, I just read this in its entirety--or, well, what you've posted so far, lol--and I love it. I understand Liz's feelings because you explain it so well, but I also pick up on the fact that Brian DOES care about her. He's not necessarily in the wrong, he just doesn't know how to handle the situation, mostly because he's in denial about the fact that there may be a deeper issue. I'm glad she has Zacky. She really needs someone with some common sense. :) Can't wait for the next chapter!
    February 21st, 2013 at 05:02am
  • Norman Reedus

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    well that's just her way of dealing with her problems.. at least zacky's there knowing she can't handle more of matt and brian's bull.
    February 21st, 2013 at 12:32am
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    I'm so happy you update regularly :) love this story!
    February 20th, 2013 at 11:50pm
  • Hatikva

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    Hi ! Sorry if I'm only commenting right now, high school is a real pain in the ass.
    I really love Trigger. I think it suits that story perfectly ;)

    Great updates by the way. The fact that Liz doesn't feel anything anymore must be so worrying and scary . I mean, we totally understand why Zacky seems to worry : she can't feel anything, she's dumb by pain. And at the same time, it must be infuriating for Brian who's really, like really, lost. But unfortunately, he doesn't know how to really face her. I was so happy when he decided to fetch her from school ; we see, we feel that he cares so damn much about her. He wants to surprise her and speak to her a little bit. But he can't bring himself to do it and so he hides behind his anger once again. And he literally ran away from her, from the problem.
    Oh and we eventually met Michelle! Well "met"...through a call - which is a good idea by the way. Introducing her like that shows that she obviously cares because she's her mother, but an absent one, always too busy. Moreover, Liz reacts like her father : she wants to go away from him - surely to rest a little bit and it's understandable - but she wants to run away nonetheless.
    And now, I'm a little bit worried about Brian because he's not getting back and either something's happened to him or he's gonna come back when she's fuckin' high. The alternative is not a good one.

    Thanks for those lovely chapters! Can't wait for the next ones :)
    February 20th, 2013 at 08:23pm
  • heyjude;;;

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    oh i can only imagine how brian will react when he finds out she got high. Great update as always! I'm so glad Michelle is a part of the story now. I feel like the pieces are coming together.
    February 20th, 2013 at 01:43am
  • YourVengeance

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    im glad your finally introduced liz mom into the story...that would be an interesting trip to NY to see her mom too, especially when Brian finds out about it too!!!
    February 20th, 2013 at 01:36am
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    im glad your finally introduced liz mom into the story...that would be an interesting trip to NY to see her mom too, especially when Brian finds out about it too!!!
    February 20th, 2013 at 01:36am
  • Norman Reedus

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    She's so neglected by her parent's, she gets no love at least not the one she needs from brian whilst her mom's too busy living her own life :
    February 20th, 2013 at 12:43am
  • Norman Reedus

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    She's so neglected by her parent's, she gets no love at least not the one she needs from brian whilst her mom's too busy living her own life :
    February 20th, 2013 at 12:43am