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  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    I think this chapter is good! But if you're not happy with it, and you need to rewrite it, do it--for you, not us. :) I personally like the turn this took, because even knowing what a sick fuck Marcus is, I didn't expect him to stab her right there in front of everybody! I don't know how Matt could be expected to restrain himself after watching that, but bless his heart...he's gonna be losing his mind worrying about her! Update as soon as you can. I must know what happens!!!!!!!
    August 2nd, 2013 at 12:14am
  • queencho

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    Don't delete please is really good! I like it
    August 1st, 2013 at 11:15pm
  • Pandakupikake

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    aw omg u better write more :( i wana see how matts handeling this
    August 1st, 2013 at 09:44pm
  • LynShiningStar

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    Good story! Don't delete it please! Can't wait for the next update!!
    July 31st, 2013 at 11:08pm
  • SM13

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    Don't delete and rewrite. Focus on the next chapter. I liked this one.
    July 26th, 2013 at 06:20pm
  • BehindGreenEyes

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    OMG I just found this and its amazing! I love it! Update soon!
    July 26th, 2013 at 02:58am
  • Star Angel

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    Update soon please
    July 26th, 2013 at 12:51am
  • Pandakupikake

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    more :) please?
    July 25th, 2013 at 08:41am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    I don't think anyone is going to complain about Matt wanting to cause Marcus some serious pain! In fact, we're all eagerly waiting for it. Lol. Can't wait for the next one!
    July 25th, 2013 at 07:17am
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    Update soon
    Amazing chapter
    I hope Matt fucks Marco up
    Can't wait for the next chapter
    July 25th, 2013 at 03:09am
  • shortygirl

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    Loved the update
    July 25th, 2013 at 01:50am
  • Heaven_syn_gates

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    Yes they going to save her
    July 24th, 2013 at 11:50pm
  • HerNameIsAlice

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    Oh my god! I'm so glad you updated! Mr. Green
    I can't wait till the next chapter. Ass kicking!
    July 24th, 2013 at 11:47pm
  • ImmortalHD

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    Holy shit dude. Let's never let Danny leave their sight, ever again? But, that bastard Marcus better not do what I think he's going to do. Because, if he does, Matt will (hopefully) kick his ass. Buut, update soon please?
    June 27th, 2013 at 09:15pm
  • queencho

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    Holy fuck what in the world! I wanna kinda punch Matt in the arm and make him be cool with zacky again! And then Danny oh god I hope that fucker doesn't do anything to her!-.- and update soon please?!
    June 25th, 2013 at 09:03am
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    Update soon
    Amazing story
    Can't wait to find out what happens
    June 25th, 2013 at 07:06am
  • heyit'sjordan_

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    i read the entire story to day, to be left on a cliffhanger like that! fuckkk! updATE sooooooon!
    June 24th, 2013 at 08:59am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    AHHHH! No! Shit...he'd better not do what I assume he might do to Danny! And whether he does or not, I hope Matt beats the shit outta him!
    June 24th, 2013 at 05:22am
  • DaniGates

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    Oh no! That is not good! I hope Danny is going to be fine. Also, I hope Matt kicks Marcus' ass for taking her! MORE SOON! PLEASE :D
    June 24th, 2013 at 04:43am
  • shortygirl

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    OMG he took Danny. I hope she is okay...
    June 24th, 2013 at 02:35am
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