I think this chapter is good! But if you're not happy with it, and you need to rewrite it, do it--for you, not us. :) I personally like the turn this took, because even knowing what a sick fuck Marcus is, I didn't expect him to stab her right there in front of everybody! I don't know how Matt could be expected to restrain himself after watching that, but bless his heart...he's gonna be losing his mind worrying about her! Update as soon as you can. I must know what happens!!!!!!!
August 2nd, 2013 at 12:14am