Chapter 32... I'm heartbroken. You've written this so... It's so real I'm not even sure I want them to come back from this. I know she hurt him but it was out of guilt to her previous life, he did it to hurt her though. You're a brilliant author!
I know this is finishes but Athena NEVER did a thing wrong ever! And he's been running around with random girls the whole time and she can't even go to Atlantic city without being accused of lying :/ I know it's norman reedus but this girl needs to dump him pronto and never look back cause he's obviously a sleaze bag who doesn't even know when he's flirting and just thinks it's normal :/
“We’d just be fucking. No romance, no flowers, no cuddling. Just wham bam thank you ma’am, see you tomorrow, meet you for lunch, have a nice night, goodbye.”
This is absolutely the best line in any fanfiction I have ever read and you are amazing.
I'm not sure if your still doing this story or not but I fell in love with it. Its really good and even of your not doing it anymore I thought you should know anyway... if your still doing it please update I can't wait to know what Happens next if not then I enjoyed reading it while it lasted :)
Amazing! I really hope they can work everything out! They've just had everything go against them and I want them to have some good luck soon. Can't wait for the next chapter! You are definitely a very talented writer! I've enjoyed reading this very much! xx