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  • AthenaMcCool

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    update T.T
    May 4th, 2013 at 09:18am
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    May 4th, 2013 at 09:18am
  • Ryane

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    Awww!!! Why does life have to be so messed up sometimes! Sad
    May 4th, 2013 at 05:46am
  • tbippus

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    update soon, please. ive been missing this story all week.
    April 24th, 2013 at 10:40pm
  • vespi

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    wooaahhh what a storie !!!! i love it . you write soo good its great !!! and i cant wait for the next uptade :)
    April 22nd, 2013 at 10:18am
  • AthenaMcCool

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    April 21st, 2013 at 05:02pm
  • Emilly_13

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    Bum bum bummmmmmmm!!!!! I'm excited he came after her,
    April 21st, 2013 at 08:05am
  • StarryReedus

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    Oh, you have to update soon!!! PLEASE!!! I'm very happy he went to see her though!! :')
    April 21st, 2013 at 01:02am
  • Aequitaas

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    So glad he's gone to see her! Hopefully they'll work things out now. Please update soon Mr. Green
    April 20th, 2013 at 08:43am
  • AthenaMcCool

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    April 18th, 2013 at 04:28pm
  • Reedus04

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    The chapter "Home" broke my heart. Very well written.
    April 17th, 2013 at 12:22pm
  • Keira91_WolfQUEEN

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    oh coooomeeee oooon! why!? please update! lol. this is so frustrating norman has to go get her like now! ahhh more please!
    April 17th, 2013 at 11:53am
  • kealyssa

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    ahhhhhhh!!!! you can't do that to us!!!! LOL!! please update when you can, I LOVE this story!!
    April 17th, 2013 at 03:22am
  • explodenamerda

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    Ohhhn no, you didn't stop there!
    This is so unfairf!! I wanna know what's gonna happen next!!!
    Please, update soon!
    April 17th, 2013 at 03:06am
  • WhoAreYouJudy

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    Holy tit I did not see that coming
    April 17th, 2013 at 02:51am
  • Mrs. Dixon

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    More now please! I love this story. I hope you update soon.
    April 17th, 2013 at 02:18am
  • Planets.Collide!

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    Holeeeeeeeeey shit!
    April 17th, 2013 at 01:58am
  • Ryane

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    Then norman will look over at her and before anything can be said she will walk out the door slamming it as hard as she can!!! Or at peat that is how I imagine me handling the situation. Cool
    April 17th, 2013 at 12:45am
  • nhetrick

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    It's not right, now I want to kick his ass!!!!!!!!
    Seriously, he's been dragging out his "hurt feelings" about her not telling him about a past relationship and he does this. Little bitch needs his ass kicked.
    April 12th, 2013 at 04:10pm
  • Aequitaas

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    I get why she's mad at him but I really hope they get back together properly haha. Please update soon Mr. Green
    April 12th, 2013 at 08:46am