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  • bitchyymermaidd

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    All I can say is, ooooooooooooooooooohhhhhh shiiiit. MY FEELINGS.
    April 11th, 2013 at 07:32am
  • Emilly_13

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    Oh my goodness, I hope he goes after her...and i hope she can forgive him!!!
    April 11th, 2013 at 04:50am
  • Ryane

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    Ooohhhh! Tell me Norman runs after her!!! Cause that is all a girl ever really wants. A guy to love her enough to chase after her when she leaves. T is the erfect test for true love!!!!! Sad Mr. Green
    April 11th, 2013 at 04:42am
  • explodenamerda

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    ohhh my god, i want to cry right now.... this is sooo sad... ._. how could norman do this to her? i was really thinking this carrie was just a friend... poor athena ._.
    April 11th, 2013 at 03:21am
  • Keira91_WolfQUEEN

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    Oh my gooood. I wanted to scremm at how that chapter ended wtf!lol please update soon
    April 11th, 2013 at 02:59am
  • StarryReedus

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    :O !!!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!! :( Please!!!
    April 11th, 2013 at 02:28am
  • WhoAreYouJudy

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    Eeep.
    April 11th, 2013 at 12:40am
  • nhetrick

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    starting to not like norman so much with this carrie chick bs. let her fall downstairs and break her neck or something.
    April 7th, 2013 at 05:13am
  • Aequitaas

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    Haha I love her neighbour. This Carrie thing is really bugging me lol I'm dying to find out what's going on! Please update soon! Mr. Green
    April 6th, 2013 at 09:46pm
  • explodenamerda

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    that's not good!! but i'm still hoping this carrie is just a friend, right? hahaha
    April 6th, 2013 at 05:32pm
  • poppins29

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    go" Apache Temper" Athena. i don't like this carrie Mr. Green
    April 6th, 2013 at 02:10pm
  • StarryReedus

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    I don't like Carrie...But I do like Athena and her detective ways. :) Please tell me you're gonna update soon!! Please :3
    April 6th, 2013 at 04:34am
  • leprechaun_katt

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    I totally love this story, quite unique. Update soon? :3
    April 6th, 2013 at 01:47am
  • Dixongurl

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    Haha i love Athena:) She is so sneaky!!!lol
    April 6th, 2013 at 01:05am
  • Planets.Collide!

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    This means another one tonight right? !?!? Or threw? Possibly more.... I need more!!!!
    April 6th, 2013 at 12:42am
  • Ryane

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    Oh how I would love to have a neighbor like her! Always getting up in everyone's biznez! Cool
    April 5th, 2013 at 11:59pm
  • hockey bliss

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    I love this! He seems realistic and so does she. Your dialogue is real and yet unique.
    April 5th, 2013 at 07:37am
  • iwritetragedies.

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    This story is soooo awesome! I'm in love!
    April 4th, 2013 at 06:38am
  • Ryane

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    Oh poor Athena! she is hurt! This was a great chapter!
    April 4th, 2013 at 05:43am
  • tbippus

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    i wanna know who carrie is!
    April 4th, 2013 at 04:22am