I actually had reread this story again but God I still love it so much. I really hope Jack isn't thinking that he ha to do something with he to prove something to his friends.
I'm iffy about her submission, like, yes I agree she should totally be a little more accepting of her fate but Jack needs to control his anger and not treat her like an object.
Ahhhhh I can't wait to see how this is going to play out.
Omg I just got the email and I literally ran to my laptop to come and read the update and oF COURSE YOU LEAVE IT AT A CLIFF HANGER I'm sort of glad she's submitting to jack now but at the same time idk her fiestyness was something I loved about her I hope jack doesn't be a dick and like rape her And I hope he gets nicer like jack stop being a dickwad being nicer will probably get her to do what you want omg ugh I love this and I love you and of course I haven't lost interest how could anyone?!
Yay you updated :) and jacks back. I got dead excited when I saw there were two chapters but they were the same :( Can't wait for another update though
@ WhereYouveBeen I understand. I meant just a side character though, not taking away from her point of view :) maybe one that she comes acrosa occasionally. Your story, and whatever you do or dont do will be great
@ Marissa.Motionless Hey! Thank you so much for your comment. I'm so glad you want to be part of it, but I'm going to keep this project to one perspective!
Im super hooked on this! Chapter 14 posted twice though. Any chance youd like a character made to be one of the people who are "owned"? I would be honored to be a part of this!
This is literally one of my favorite fics I've ever read, Especially one with an OFC (which I usually hate but I really love this one). It would be really great if you could update it sometimes soon
I absolutely cannot wait for another update, I'm so anxious about what jack is going to do once he gets there and picks her up. I hope some miracle happens and they don't fight or at least the fight not end in a beating. Update soon lovie!♡