I love how much description and detail you pour into this story! It's like watching TV inside my head! The layout is fabulous and the characters are super realistic, especially the main one. In university, are you taking creative writing? Because I think you are an amazing writer and could go far as a professional author.
omfg I feel like I just clog your comments I'm so sorry I'm annoying I know but omg nO WTF WHY DID PETE HAVE TO GO FIND HER UGH NO OMFG YAY JACK IS COMING BACK YAY omg no No he can't beat her nonono No she has to lie and be like I couldn't take it here anymore they were driving me crazy idk something, something that'll make jack not almost kill her. Jack has to go get her and be all mad but then like they talk or he just be like yknow idec bc now I get to take you home and then they go to jacks house and they start to get more along and fall in love and I'm getting ahead of myself Aw I hope you're doing well with school and such :) this was a lovely chapter and you're a lovely author and i cannot wait till the next update. ((I may have squealed a bit when I got the email saying this had gotten updated))
Ugh I just reread all of this and I just asdfghjkl. I wonder how Jacks doing without her and where the hell she's gonna go if she even gets any far and not caught again. I kind of want her to go back to Jack somehow but only if he's nicer to her I just omg. I hope that you haven't given up on this or anything because I'm still in love with it and I'm dying for an update!
-comes back to pester you about updating- Hi I love u and this and I always reread this and I'm d y i n g to know what happened so uh yeah c: -giggles and runs away-
I just started reading this and so far it's amazing. I love the drama, action and the suspense. Please update soon because I really want to know what's going to happen next!
I never comment but I cried when I got done because I want more so bad. I don't think I've ever been so into a story before. Please please please please update!!!!!! <<<<33