Doug is being mean, and it's not her fault. If he likes her then he should either fess up or leave it alone, because making their friendship tense, and hateful isn't helping him or natalie. Oliver, and natalie are adorable, and Carol is a great mum. I like her. This might be a little ignorant, but how does everyone fan wise know oliver's brother tom? I mean I know he isn't in the band, but I've never seen him or heard of him outside of all the fanfics, and I just wondered.
Please posts the next one! I love how slow you are taking the story. I like how they both think they are in the friends zone with each other perfect :)
Your writing is really good! I'm already in love with this story. Can not wait to read more. I'm excited to read how their relationship is developing later. Haha! Hope you update soon .xx