The Walking Boy - Comments

Wonderful chapter!
They must end up together!
Please update again soon, I can't wait to see what happens!

i want them to end up together so bad!

They better end up together. Btw this chapter was maybe the best one ever.

this chapter was fucking great! I totally want them to end up together!

I'm at the point with these two where I want to grab their heads and smash their faces together saying "Now kiss." And then lock them in a closet until they get their feelings out on the table. They are perfect for each other! That's my opinion at least....Great job! Can't wait for more!!!

More more more more please!

omggggg like i love this so so much!

I think it's really nice of you to respond to comments :) As far as constructive criticism goes, I like it when someone takes the time to let me know what they enjoy, or what they don't care for as much. It helps me improve as a writer, and in return, I think it establishes a good connection between the author and the reader. A reader may even come up with an idea that can take your work into a whole new direction, and change it for the better. It all depends on how you look at it I suppose. But I appreciate your replies back :) Also, I loved the new update, and hope things start looking up for you and your family!

I laughed a bit when I read this: "In Natalie’s opinion, he looked more like Oliver than Tom did", because I went to an BMTH show yesterday, and a few hours before the show we hung out with Jordan outside the venue/on the venues place, and this girl came running towards us with her friend trailing behind her, and she was all like: "Oh my God, Oli *letting out a sob* can I get a picture with you", and when she saw that it was Jordan she was just like: "Oh" and looked sad - We all (not the girls) couldn't help but laugh...

Oh sorry, I just thought it was kinda funny when that line was in the update ... I loved the update btw.

Heyo!
Wow. I really don't like the way that their relationship is heading. Hope Oli and Doug will come around.
Ugh I still love this story. You're amazing. Tbh.

Xo

I'm super glad you updated, I loved it!

(I think it's really awesome that you take time to reply to the comments! It's great to have an interaction with you ;) )

AHHHHH! I'm so happy with the update like thank you babe!

Yay a new chapter! It was really great but it totally frustrated me haha! I want to read more, I think I'm addicted... I hope in the next chapter there will be more interactions beetween Natalie and the others characters (Jordan maybe, she seems very interested in him).
Hope my english is not too bad btw. See ya next time :) xx

Oh my god I am so glad you updated, thank you xx

It's nice to see how excited you are from the comments you got! Hopefully it will somehow relieve some stress from all the hectic you're going through :)
Looking forward to see more interactions between Oli and Natalie in the next chapters!

NatYou bring life to this story. I really don't regularly read band-based fiction, and honestly, I wasn't going to stay for very long after comment swap sent me here. Now I'm glad I did. From the first line, to the last line, I've been loving this...it's as if I'm in the scene myself. Natalie seems interesting, and her story and character is perfect for this...

Subscribed. :) This is wonderful.

Your story is awsome! I found it today, and I couldn't stop reading. I hope that you will update soon :)

Please please update soon!

Yes this is perf