Hooked - Comments

WHAT. NO. WHAT. HOW DARE YOU. HOOOW DARE YOUUUUU. I QUIT THIS LIFE. I QUIT IT. I'M DONE. GOODBYE.

I cried. ):
Wonderful!

So beautiful! It's sad they'll never get their chance to be happy, but life is cruel that way.

I'm dying kid! That is such a crazy cliff hanger! I'm so excited, I'm literally wiggling in my seat a bit. Do you think you'll do a squeal? I truly hope so. You're a fantastic writer.

Oh man! You cannot leave that kind of cliff hanger! So cruel, but I completely loved it.

You may not have liked it, but I loved how this chapter turned out! I'm literally biting my nails in excitement for the next chapter! Wonderful work. (:

Loved it! Can't wait to see what happens next.

Edit: Oops! Sorry double post, stupid phone.

Loved it! Can't wait to see what happens next.

Love how you managed to merge the two story lines so seamlessly. I have a feeling maybe Ariel is going to get sent back to Neverland when Regina destroys Storybrooke? Maybe be reunited with her family?

PS. LOVE Of Monsters and Men <3

@ silk tea.
Definitely filler-y. I've been too lazy to write it cause I knew it would be kind of boring to write. But things should pick up a bit now that I've finally got them out of Neverland!

I'm excited for the update. This chapter seemed kind of filler-y to me probably because it's basically a complete synopsis with Ariel just added in of that episode of OUAT. :/ But I'm excited for Killian and Ariel to be together dammit. THEY BELONG TOGETHER.

I'm excited for the update. This chapter seemed kind of filler-y to me probably because it's basically a complete synopsis with Ariel just added in of that episode of OUAT. :/ But I'm excited for Killian and Ariel to be together dammit. THEY BELONG TOGETHER.

I really can not wait for the next update. I love this story. And I seriously love how you are working everything together. I hope you update soon. Cheers!

I'm finally caught up on this! Seriously adore this story but it's so jumpy. Like Ariel doesn't remember Bae but then she realizes he's this stranger that gave her food….who also happened to help her off the island. That's a pretty big thing to forget. You know? Maybe mention that she repressed all her memories of Neverland and it took a long time to forget or…something? And also you'd think Bae would remember her because he obviously remembered Wendy and she didn't change at all. Just something to think about. Anywho, can't wait till the next update.

Loved it! Merry Christmas!

Oo lala cuddles with the captain

I just started watching OUaT, and I immediately fell in love with Hook, who couldn't resist that hot pirate. But you have to make more Ariel and Hook moment!! I love this, absolutely. Please date and make more Ariel & Hook moments. ;) who cares about Henry! Just kidding, just kidding. <3

Loved it! As much as I love the direction OUAT is heading, I really love your version so much!

I love this story so much. Everything works well together--makes sense--and Areil's relationship with Killian is so adorable that I can't help but smile. You're writing is good. I enjoy reading how you work your sentences and such.

Needs more Killian and Ariel moments //shot dead
EUE so eager to read more~! I hope you can update again soon