Hooked - Comments

Ah! Loved it! Neil and Emma are just <3 <3 <3 and of course he would help her out!

AHHHHHH Update soon please!

Just read- er, chapter two if you don't count the intro as a chapter. Is it weird that I imagine Ariel in just a really long, comfy sweater and a pair of shorts, no shoes?

Another cliff-hanger?! Yes and no.... :) I love the fact that Ariel and Hook are getting closer...

i totally love this story.. i actually had a dream a while ago about ariel being in storybrook and meeting killian so when I found this story I naturally just had to read it

I legit screamed when Neal came bursting in. Which is not a good thing seeing as it's 2am and my roommate is going to kill me in 10 seconds. But you don't even know how awful it was for me watching him disappear in the finale. I don't cry at tv shows and movies because I know their fake...I was screaming at the TV and crying when that happened. What can I say, Once gets to me.

Back to your story. This. Is. Totally. Awesome! I love it, I was super excited when I saw you updated! Keep it coming hon! :)

I'm SO happy that they found Henry! And that Ariel and Hook had their first kiss!! That's super sweet and I can easily see them as a couple.
Great update and I'm really looking forward to the next one.

Awesome book! I love it and can't wait for the next update!

Aww that was super adorable and sweet... I just love Ariel and Killian together! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Awe I love it! I love the whole plot you have with Peter Pan and the group, but I really loved the little moment with the hook getting her as they kissed. It was oddly endearing.

this. is. ADDICTING.

Love this story! Can't wait for more!

This is great! Loved the cliff-hanger and I hope you update soon because I want to know what happens next!

Oh Emma, they were so close and I love how soft Killian is with Ariel!! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Damn it Emma! I'm glad they found him, but come on! Wait like five seconds!

the idea of sacrificing a child born of true love is a genius idea!!

@ silk tea.
I'll go through and fix that! I thought about having Killian calling him Pan, but for some reason I didn't. As for Regina knowing about Ariel, they had a brief conversation in the 10th chapter and she just kind of knew Ariel had been a mermaid. I kind of made her out to be this all knowing person.

I definitely like the story of how Peter turned dark but the constant use of calling him Peter Pan feels weird to me, I think if Killian called him Pan like he does in the movie it would be a bit more easy to flow through. My only other thing was how did Regina know Ariel was a mermaid? I don't remember her telling Regina...

BUT I LOVE THIS STORY OKAI BAI.

Great take on a possible explanation for the Peter Pan situation!

Love this story! The Peter Pan thing makes sense, and is really a creative and interesting idea. Update soon :)