The Unconventional - Comments, page 7

wowfairy13 (100)

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This story is my addiction and I need a strooong hit, man....lol theyshouldjustmakeoutalreadybecauseomgthefeels

April 10th, 2013 at 12:03am

Louise Belcher (100)

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Yep. Yes. Mhm. I like this fic.

(but I have a very strong feeling that my hearts going to get ripped out sooner than later

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April 9th, 2013 at 09:59am

BlackRosesBleedBlack (100)

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Everything just completely backfired and blew up in his face...
How is he going to fix it?? :O

April 9th, 2013 at 12:05am

yurio (100)

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awww, I feel bad for Akiva. :( I want to give him a hug, even though he probably wouldn't want one...by the way I actually like Akiva's name. It's nice and suits him.

April 8th, 2013 at 03:29am

rathlora (100)

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dang, wish i could get ninty seven on tests. Akiva you kill me.

April 7th, 2013 at 10:53pm

Still Dreaming (100)

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Awh this is breaking my heart!! Josh and Akiva would be so good together!

April 7th, 2013 at 06:40pm

rathlora (100)

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out of pre-written?! how will we survive?

April 6th, 2013 at 07:40pm

Fandango (775)

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Better get writing more then

I NEED THIS STORY OKAY. There are so few well-written slash fics out there.

April 5th, 2013 at 08:34pm

wowfairy13 (100)

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Man, you are so talented! I absolutely love reading your writing!!!

April 5th, 2013 at 08:05pm

BlackRosesBleedBlack (100)

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I think it's perfectly paced :3
And Akiva is a wonderfully conflicted character. :D
I love it! <3

April 5th, 2013 at 12:38pm

Fandango (775)

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THIS IS JUST SO BEAUTIFUL AND PERFECT AND ANGSTY AND I'M JUST ALL KINDS OF IN LOVE WITH IT. AND POSSIBLY YOU.

April 4th, 2013 at 08:37pm

HowlingHale (100)

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i love it! :3

April 4th, 2013 at 10:23am

BleedingHearts (100)

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I think it's going nicely, it's got a great pace.

April 4th, 2013 at 09:52am

wowfairy13 (100)

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Gosh dang would somebody get some already lol! Akiva needs to kiss Josh or something, this story is like painfully addicting it is so good!!!!

April 4th, 2013 at 07:01am

rathlora (100)

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ouch. that was surprisingly malicous

April 3rd, 2013 at 04:16pm

rathlora (100)

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ouch. that was surprisingly malicous

April 3rd, 2013 at 04:15pm

BleedingHearts (100)

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I really like the structure of this story!

April 3rd, 2013 at 09:34am

Kacen Shea (100)

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More, more, more. It's so great.

April 3rd, 2013 at 05:29am

BlackRosesBleedBlack (100)

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I like how the focus went from Josh to more of Akiva and how he sees things. It's all quite interesting :)

April 3rd, 2013 at 02:54am

rathlora (100)

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meh. he's so childish, but i love him <3 Akiva

April 1st, 2013 at 04:21pm