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  • wowfairy13

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    Finally is right!!! I am crying and omg the feels... this was so perfect, and the beauty was in the build up so far all leading to a simple text and spontaneous fun, which for people like Josh and Akiva, is a rare moment. But honestly, I have come to expect nothing less from my favorite story I've come across online.
    April 22nd, 2013 at 04:36am
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    Finally is right!!! I am crying and omg the feels... this was so perfect, and the beauty was in the build up so far all leading to a simple text and spontaneous fun, which for people like Josh and Akiva, is a rare moment. But honestly, I have come to expect nothing less from my favorite story I've come across online.
    April 22nd, 2013 at 04:36am
  • HowlingHale

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    oh yes x33
    April 21st, 2013 at 07:05pm
  • HowlingHale

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    oh yes x33
    April 21st, 2013 at 07:02pm
  • BlindMagsEyes

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    Gahhhh so cute!!! <333333 more!
    April 21st, 2013 at 04:13pm
  • Fandango

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    EEEP. MORE NOW.
    April 21st, 2013 at 03:38pm
  • rathlora

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    sweeeet! finally, that was so cute :D
    April 21st, 2013 at 12:35pm
  • Kacen Shea

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    That...that was amazing. More! This last chapter was so well written, wow...this entire story is, but that last chapter made me so happy.
    April 21st, 2013 at 12:11pm
  • BlackRosesBleedBlack

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    This is the cherry on top of a great night :D
    April 21st, 2013 at 08:14am
  • Still Dreaming

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    I just died. This was so beautiful and I am so happy. And dead. Oh God am I ever so giddy.
    April 21st, 2013 at 07:09am
  • wowfairy13

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    i so wanted them to kiss! and then they didn't D: still, the courtship is always the best part ;)
    I totally was gonna say the same thing :)
    April 17th, 2013 at 06:25am
  • rathlora

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    i so wanted them to kiss! and then they didn't D: still, the courtship is always the best part ;)
    April 15th, 2013 at 10:27pm
  • wowfairy13

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    Just dropping my appreciations :) Keep it up!
    April 14th, 2013 at 05:01am
  • SpeakfortheUnspoken

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    O.O UPDATE AGAIN PLLEAASSSSSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. I Love this story =3
    April 13th, 2013 at 05:08am
  • Galaxy-Princess

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    This is so amazing. I can't.
    April 13th, 2013 at 02:20am
  • BlackRosesBleedBlack

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    “Why can’t you be more like Ronen?” Ouch, that must really hurt. D:
    April 12th, 2013 at 06:49pm
  • HowlingHale

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    i love you and your amazing stories, they're just like - perfect! character development and you're not rushing anything so it is literally a story about those character, not just some fluffy stuff. and it's really quite realistic and Akiva might be kind of an asshole but i love him x3
    April 12th, 2013 at 07:08am
  • Still Dreaming

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    Shitty day turned amazing because of this chapter.
    April 12th, 2013 at 05:36am
  • yurio

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    wow, so I hate Akiva's mom now. I like Josh for not being a jerk to Akiva even though Akiva can be sort of a jerk sometimes. Anyways, I can't wait for the next update. This story is so exciting. (:
    April 12th, 2013 at 05:33am
  • Galaxy-Princess

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    this is so goooooood. can't wait for an update. it's like my new favorite thing
    April 10th, 2013 at 03:55am
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