I've just opened your story. Let me tell you that the video in the beginning is GENIUS. Honestly, I've never seen it done like that. It makes me want to read it. Well done.
IS THAT THE END? PLEASE DON'T TELL ME THAT IS THE END. I CAN'T HANDLE THAT BEING THE END. I HAVE GROWN SO ATTACHED TO YOUR CHARACTERS. I HAVE BEEN READING YOUR STORY MOST OF THE TIME THAT I HAVE BEEN AT MY FRIEND'S HOUSE. I AM A HORRIBLE GUEST.
I have been reading this story all morning and I am in love with it. I am on chapter twenty-two and I can't wait to read more. Unfortunately. I have to leave for a friend's house in a couple of minutes. But, as soon as I get back, I am going to read the rest and fall even more in love. Aaaaaah! I just love this story so much. I can't stop reading it and I don't want to.
This chapter really shows the character development of Josh as well as the contrasting consistency of Ronen. Can't wait to read more, I was so glad you finally updated!