June 5th, 2015 at 01:17am
So far I've only read up to chapter 7 for the moment and just needed to stop and comment on how much I'm really digging this story. I was OBSESSED with The Outsiders in 7th grade when we had to read it, but more importantly, I was even more obsessed with Dally. I literally printed out pictures of him and stuck it onto my notebook and also bought a white shirt and wrote, "I love Dally" in puffy paint all over it. It's literally the most embarrassing I've ever done but this story is bringing back old memories.
I'm loving the two POVs, it gives the whole situation different perspectives and I really like that. I feel bad for Elaine but I'm finding it hard to believe she went all the way to Tulsa so easily and quickly, but I guess that's contributed to the whole 'diary' thing. But anyways, I'm going to continue reading it and scream when Dally makes an appearance
Other than that little thing, I really liked your first chapter. I like the way you set your characters up so far, and you do kind of have the same style as the novel 'The Outsiders' going on for this (not sure if it's intentional) but I like that too. As far as first chapters go (I only read one) You're doing pretty great.