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  • Patty Lovell

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    what does hiatus mean? lol great story
    February 7th, 2010 at 11:59pm
  • dewdrop.

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    D: that was a horribly great story.
    i hated franks mom >:[
    but its was great:]
    August 14th, 2009 at 02:46am
  • Captain John Hart

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    I agree Hiatus definitely beats deletion.

    Can't wait till the hiatus is finished but take as long as you guys want.
    March 11th, 2009 at 10:41pm
  • Venomous.Vampire

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    Hiatus? NO!
    Ah well, I look forward to the new version =]

    xoxo
    March 11th, 2009 at 10:03pm
  • Ermin.

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    My dear, I love you so much. This decision saddens me, as you know. But I'm just happy you aren't deleting it. In the end, I'm hoping you will modify it, but until then... Go work on Return To Sender, you goofball.

    :arms:
    March 11th, 2009 at 12:08am
  • Dorian Gray

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    Aw, I'm so sad to see this one go on hiatus Sad
    It's probably my favorite story of yours and I'll miss it very much. But yeah, I totally love the uniqueness of Return To Sender as well :tehe:
    Good luck onboth all of your stories, being stuck is always such a pain in the butt.

    :arms:
    March 10th, 2009 at 11:07pm
  • lizzicleromance

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    I love you, Kaitlyn, so very much. I know how hard this is for you, but I'm so excited you're not deleting it. This is such an original story and I love how beautiful you have made it so far. I know you'll return with this one day and I will most certainly be here waiting for it.

    :hug: Thanks for the shout-out!
    I'm more than happy to be here, my dear.
    I always will be. <3
    March 10th, 2009 at 10:12pm
  • the hatter.

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    I finally managed to read all of this.
    And I loved it. :mrgreen:

    I'm desperate for more.
    February 21st, 2009 at 09:30pm
  • Alice Verney

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    cute update
    January 28th, 2009 at 08:31pm
  • GayChubbyDater

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    Ahhhh, poor Frankie, I love him!

    WRITE MORE SLAVE!!!! I mean, haha, Yeah, more!!!

    xoxo!
    January 10th, 2009 at 08:38am
  • XrayPineapple

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    Oh go butch grandma! At least one person has the balls to stand up to this kind of shit. No child deserves to live in a home like that. And its heartbreaking seeing it from Mikey's view, knowing that there's something horribly wrong but knowing there's nothing he can do about it. He's a smart kid, poor thing.
    January 3rd, 2009 at 12:12pm
  • Venomous.Vampire

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    I think I'm in love with Frank's grandma.
    He should live with her.
    Xo
    December 31st, 2008 at 07:06pm
  • allie-friggin-tastic

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    OMG!
    I just want to give Frank a hug!!!
    xD

    Like a giant bearhug.
    he needs it.

    can't wait for more!
    December 29th, 2008 at 05:36pm
  • William Beckett.

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    Stupid Linda.

    I wunna spork her ass.
    December 29th, 2008 at 10:17am
  • Angelus.

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    Aw.. Poor Frank. I really wasn't expecting that from his mum! Drunk yeah.. but drugs? Jeez... (at least I think it was drugs... I could be wrong *ponders*)

    I hope she doesn't hurt little Frank Cry
    Can't wait for more, that was a great update. I love how you get across the stages of their relationship as things happen, and they grow up. :arms:
    December 22nd, 2008 at 07:03am
  • Romance.

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    Poor little Frank :(
    December 21st, 2008 at 12:09pm
  • M451n

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    Poor baby! It's so pathetic that life actually works like that. T.T
    December 20th, 2008 at 02:59am
  • lizzicleromance

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    Wow Kaitlyn, I'm so proud of you for getting this out! When I check my email I did a little dance, similar to this guy :crazy:

    The visual images that you create are simply stunning. Imagining a young Frank, Gerard, Mikey, and Joey are simply adorable; but here, you bring them to life in a way that is absolutely gorgeous.

    I can see Mikey and Gerard waiting in their winter apparel on the front steps, decked out sort of similar to Ralphie and his little brother from the Christmas Story, hahaha.

    I can see that tiny Frank watching in horror that unfolded between his grandma and parents from the front doorway.

    I can't get over how sweet Mikey is, and how strong he is for merely being only six years old. He's so caring and is struggling so hard to come to terms with his life changing, and wanting to make Frank's life better. If only he had gotten to live with his dad, instead.

    But what really endures me about Mikey, is he isn't naive. Even for six years old, he sees and feels the pain that Frank is going through. He doesn't shrug Frank's feelings aside; doesn't pretend like he isn't crumbling before his very eyes like most six year olds would do. It's very heart-warming yet heart-shattering at the exact same time, because while his little six year old mind should be carefree and enjoying simple things a child normally does, he's got Frank to worry about and he can't be carefree, knowing that Frank's life is in such shambles.

    I can't imagine the horrors that Frank must see, day in and day out [and even at night; especially at night] while his mother destroys herself and even her son's life.

    Another beautiful chapter, full of everything wonderful that this story offers us. Thank you for writing it <3

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    Gots me a page claim.
    I'm naming it, Turkwah Skrinnies.
    'Cause we pwn, hardcore. <3
    Make that high five #1.
    December 19th, 2008 at 08:25pm
  • merance

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    Aw, poor Frankie...
    Please help him. =[
    December 19th, 2008 at 07:47pm
  • Odysseus

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    NO!!!!!!!!!! Why is he staying with his Mommy?!??!?!?!?!?!???!
    His mommy isn't nice!
    And I love Ruth, she is like, the awesomest Granny EVER!
    December 19th, 2008 at 05:30pm