Play The Field. - Comments

This is why I come on here. For stories like this. It's going to be incredible when it gets going because it's really good now.
I have to say it, this website was made for creative-writing, then it became a website for Frerard and to be honest, I love any writing as long as it's good but I come here to read Frerard because it's not the thought of it, because I'm too old now to get flustered over sexy men (no matter how sexy they are) kissing (-stops to think for a moment-), it's how beautiful it's made and this story will make me cry before it gets half way through.

wow...i love this story! everytime i read about frank, my eyes water...poor boy.

I must admit... I had a ten second intake of breath due to excitement over this being updated. Haha.
Kiboshed... Kudos to using strange and unusual words that do not get used often. You know, I feel like some of these things were some of what Gerard would do. Not the foul language at that young of an age, but the protective-ness over family. Just this bond in the story is great.

...Frank, nooooo! Sadness. D:

Oh nos poor Frankie :( he should have told what really happened not that he fell down the stairs :( if she hurts him one more time imma find her and beat her up for hurting Frankie :(
I like how gee stood up for miky when that kid hit him it's just a game people get over it :)
Can't wait for more and this story is really well written :)

You never cease to amaze me with each and every update!

I love that you can pull so strongly on my heartstrings with this story. You make me ache for Frank and Mikey in a way that usually leaves me at a loss for words. Well done!

Oh, Frankie... :( </3
This chapter was amazing, but heartbreaking. Ah. Can't wait to read more <3333

Awh. This chapter totally broke my heart. Poor little Frankie.
I like how Gerard took up for Mikey and I'm curious about Gerard and Joey's relationship.

I don't have much to say other than this last chapter was well written and I enjoyed the read.

I look forward to the next chapter [:

update? :D X

this is amazing.

This is fantastic!
I'm so worried about sweet little Frankie...
Update soon? <33

wow. this is an intense story. please update soon.

I do not agree with Frank being in hospital :'(
You have written him as a beautiful thing and I know the next chapter will make me cry ¬¬

This story is fucking adorable, yet excruciatingly heartbreaking.
Poor Frankie... His character reminds me of a little girl i used to hold hands with in elementary school. It's strange how all of the pieces finally come together, long after it's too late.

I love how this tells a love story from a child's perspective. It has the same sweet innocence that questions why the grass is green and why the sky is blue.

I like Joey. I know he's meant to be the 'bad guy' or the antagonist, but i'm very fond of him. He's so mature for his age, and i can't help but get the impression that he has an awful childhood, too. Though, i have a feeling that he's going to sexually abuse Mikey. The way he talks to him and stuff, it just makes it seem that way. I hope i'm wrong, but, y'know. This is from a reader's perspective.

I can't wait to see where this story goes. It's very intriguing and i can NOT wait until you update.

P.S I love how you dont make this seem cliche. Most stories that tell of abuse are sad, but very, very cheesy. I hate cheesiness. It's not a good quality. You, obviously, dont have to worry about this. This is genius :D

I stayed up all night reading this!
I love this story please update again soon (:

I literally had a mini heartattack when I saw that this was updated :D
Go mrs way make that stupid principal put them in the same class again :)
Oh nooooos what did Linda do to Frankie?! Ahhhhhhh please let him not be to hurt :(
I've really missed this story so much and I can't believe it's been two years since it was last updated but you're forgiven and update soon please I wanna know what happened to frankie

oh my gosh!!!! I am so darn happy you updated!! I've loved this story for a really long time and this just made my day. XD

I do not have time to write a long comment about this...
But seriously... this was the ONE story that was sent to my email telling me it had been updated. And I almost started crying. You know I love this story, so yeah.
Oh and there is just one part in here where you missed a "he" or "him" or something like that.
I can't remember where, but that was the only typo I saw.
I love you very much. <3

This is an absolutely fantabulous story!!! I am completely in love with it. It's unique, well written, and AWESOME! I hope it gets updated again soon, because it may just be one of my favorite stories ever

^& apparently I can't type worth crap...I'm so glad that you updated!** XD

PS: I'm still very much in love with ickle Mikey in this. He just takes hold of my heart and doesn't really leave much room for a choice in the matter.

Um you just pretty much made my freaking night loads better! I checked my email and saw a notification and about squealed when I saw it was for this story! :D

I am so glad that you dated! It was definitely missed!

What a ending, seriously. Now I'm on edge 'cause I want to know why Frank's in the hospital and all that jazz! Mrs. Way could seriously take down a elementary school principal, hands down; loved that scene! XD

I would love to say more but the words are just not coming out how I want them to. The wait was so worth it though! :D