I had actually given up on this story, it's been like two and a half years since I even looked and I decided to randomly search it at work... and there are new perfectly amazing chapters, my deary!
So of course I had to re-read it all and go on a spectacular emotional roller coaster once again, where you played so cruelly with my heart strings!
I absolutely adore the musings of Mini Mikey, he is such a smart kid and breaks my heart every time he touches on something so fucking adult that a kid like him never needs know, live the myth of marriage doesn't last for ever and that horrible idea that a mother could strike their own child! Not to mention having to read about all the horrible atrocities that are befalling poor Frankie. No child deserves to go through that.
I love the way you write your characters, even from the tiny snippets of information you drip feed us with we can see that they are such well rounded characters that exist entirely. You truly have an amazing talent, and I love it so!
Keep on writing, and I'll always be here reading :D
This is just the cutest and most cute and amazing thing ever. I squeal every single time I see an update. And the Valentine's. Ah. Just, aaah. I hope they see each other again. You are an amazing writer, and this is just perfect.
You, my dear, are amazing. I like how your starting out with them as kids. It makes me want to pick them up and squeeze them. Deff a subscriber. Update soon. We'll all be reading =^.^=
I absolutely love this story but I think the plot is developing a bit too slow. Pick up the pace??? :D Of course its your decision on whether to do so or not. Either way good story.
I give up trying to write anything that would be helpful to you in terms of suggestions on how to make your writing technique better... You write so beautifully. I love you.
I feel kind of strange and creepy for being so in love with Frank and Mikey, because 1. They're kids. 2. I love them for being so in love with each other.
O.O I love this!!! it's so cute... very well done. touches the heart <3 Frank and Mikey are so sweet. oh, goddamn it, Gerard is awful LOL this is amazing, keep up the awesome work!!!
I'm not even going to lie... I got way too excited when I saw you updated... And then I got way too excited again when I saw the chapter was entitled "Valentine's Day"... But I really don't care hahaha(:
So the fact that Frank asked Mikey to be his Valentine effectively made my heart melt into a gooey substance on the floor<33
I don't even know what else to say without rambling like an idiot, so I'll just say that I loved this chapter and well pretty much this story as well. You're an amazing writer and I look forward to each update. Brava.(:
Oh, goddamn it, you are so good at this!!!!!!!! I love it and how different this is. through a child's view we get so much innocence from Mikey but a mature and creepy lifestyle for Frank. goddamn it, we need more writers like you!!! very innocent, very child-like, and very mature. odd combination to write with, yes, but never the less, I love it and I will be back for more. :) keep it up.
Hey; a friend of mine introduced me to this earlier today and I practically flew through it. This is really so fucking precious; I love it, and I hope you decide to continue writing it. Soon, please? <3
I literally threw my hands up in the air when I seen this had been updated. And it was 1 o'clock in the morning.
ANYWAY. That was so sad, I'm just sitting her like 'Oh my God woman if you were real I would kill you for hitting the child version of Frank Iero.' And two months? *cries*
Update soon please! This is my favorite story on here c: