Call It Off - Comments

I really enjoy your writing. And this story in particular, because it feels so real. The friends with benefits part are so real, and all the writing feels so... yeah, real. hahaha, sorry, english not my first language, gotta buy a thesaurus haha.
Anyways, I really enjoy it, and this chapter was really hot. But also really sweet.
I can't wait for you to update, I would love to read new stuff everyday it's so good.
Thanks for taking the time to write quality chapters :)

Adore this story! Love every chapter amd their relationship. I think maybe Ben is a little more invested than she is?

I love the chapter titles a lot because I know and go to all those streets/places. Edmonton represent ;)

I like how you are so involved with every detail of this story! great job! can't wait for the next chapter!

Another winner for you with those ex Chicago boys!

The way you ended the last chapter blew my mind, mostly because I've been in that situation for the last four months and it's definitely something that deserves to be written. As always, I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings! Also, I try not to comment on every update for this because your writing is so good that I reread each chapter each time you update just to make sure I'm not missing anything. I kind of look at this story like a book that I don't want to stop reading so I wait around for a bit after an update. But know that I am definitely reading and definitely loving everything you're doing :)

Really like this so far! You're on a good pace. Update soon :)

Oh boy he's already inviting her to meet his teammates

Just found this and really like the beginning of this. Can't wait to read more!!!

Gah...Ben's last line killed me!! You're making me love him

I love this! I cannot wait for the next update!

Love love love love love this! I can't wait for more. Your description of his eyes...wow. Spot on.

I already like this!

I'll admit I got so sucked into this that I was a little sad when I got to the bottom and realized that there is no chapter 2 yet. Happy to see a Ben Eager story...there aren't many!

Love it! Can't wait for more!

I'm not sure what to say about this other than I can't wait to see what you have in store. Shell Games threw me for a few loops and I'm expecting this will do the same-- definitely one of the best things a writer can do to their readers is surprise them. So excited!

Oh my goodness! A story about Ben Eager. I can not contain my freakin excitement over this one. I'm so excited to see someone write about him. There's not too many stories about him on here.