June 24th, 2013 at 02:30am
Call It Off - Comments
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Adore this story! Love every chapter amd their relationship. I think maybe Ben is a little more invested than she is?June 23rd, 2013 at 11:52pm
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I love the chapter titles a lot because I know and go to all those streets/places. Edmonton represent ;)June 11th, 2013 at 01:15am
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I like how you are so involved with every detail of this story! great job! can't wait for the next chapter!June 10th, 2013 at 12:20am
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Another winner for you with those ex Chicago boys!June 9th, 2013 at 08:33pm
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The way you ended the last chapter blew my mind, mostly because I've been in that situation for the last four months and it's definitely something that deserves to be written. As always, I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings! Also, I try not to comment on every update for this because your writing is so good that I reread each chapter each time you update just to make sure I'm not missing anything. I kind of look at this story like a book that I don't want to stop reading so I wait around for a bit after an update. But know that I am definitely reading and definitely loving everything you're doing :)June 9th, 2013 at 06:43am
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Really like this so far! You're on a good pace. Update soon :)June 1st, 2013 at 06:47pm
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Oh boy he's already inviting her to meet his teammatesMay 26th, 2013 at 01:33am
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Just found this and really like the beginning of this. Can't wait to read more!!!May 24th, 2013 at 04:23am
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Gah...Ben's last line killed me!! You're making me love himMay 11th, 2013 at 01:23am
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I love this! I cannot wait for the next update!May 1st, 2013 at 02:19am
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Love love love love love this! I can't wait for more. Your description of his eyes...wow. Spot on.April 28th, 2013 at 08:30am
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I already like this!April 14th, 2013 at 06:25pm
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I'll admit I got so sucked into this that I was a little sad when I got to the bottom and realized that there is no chapter 2 yet. Happy to see a Ben Eager story...there aren't many!April 14th, 2013 at 05:10am
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Love it! Can't wait for more!April 14th, 2013 at 04:44am
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I'm not sure what to say about this other than I can't wait to see what you have in store. Shell Games threw me for a few loops and I'm expecting this will do the same-- definitely one of the best things a writer can do to their readers is surprise them. So excited!April 14th, 2013 at 03:18am
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Oh my goodness! A story about Ben Eager. I can not contain my freakin excitement over this one. I'm so excited to see someone write about him. There's not too many stories about him on here.March 25th, 2013 at 03:56pm
Anyways, I really enjoy it, and this chapter was really hot. But also really sweet.
I can't wait for you to update, I would love to read new stuff everyday it's so good.
Thanks for taking the time to write quality chapters :)