Flames in Heaven - Comments

Once again, I am not disappointed by another work of you two. a shadow and a light; angel and demon: it's a phenomenal pairing. Hell seems very dark whilst heaven is very angelic and clean, neat. I'm looking forward to more.

It commented twice, so I edited this to let you know in advance. ^

I read this on my other account so thank you for recommending me this to continue reading! I loved it so much and I'm going to continue loving it

Maria, this is another great story from you. And you don't have to thank me again. You are the only author on here whose stories I read all. c:

@ Vampchick201
lol... thanks sooo much....

I love the concept of this! The intensity is overwhelming yet addicting, and the idea of a demon and an angel falling for each other is exciting due to the danger an consequences its bound to bring. I really love it!

@ dougie poynter;
Thanks so much... I am happy that you are enjoying the story...

This really is a unique story. I like how you get right down into the nitty-gritty within the first chapter and I love the stark contrast between Heaven and Hell that you both show, even within the first one or two chapters. Hell seems like this free-for-all where everything is all sex, drugs and rock 'n roll, whereas you've portrayed Heaven as this beautiful idyllic paradise and I really like that the contrast is shown almost immediately. It kind of sets everything up for the future romance, which also seems to be filled with stark opposites. Alexiel seems to be all about pure love and everything like that, whereas Damion just seems to be all about torturing people and sex. I love how this is playing out so far between the two of them, and I think that this definitely has a great plotline! It really is different to anything I've read before, and you both have lovely writing styles that really compliment each other.

I'll be announcing the winners of the contest later on tonight, so good luck!

I'm loving it so far!

Ok I'm addicted! Need an update for my addiction please!

Woo, can I just say your banner's very intense! There's a lot of really steamy, slutty sex in this story isn't there? Well, I'd really like to see some relationships build and fall. With all this Las Vegas talk, I'm very eager after reading the first two chapters and I'll definitely read a little more! In my opinion, I think you captured the angels well. Being as they are Heaven's army, they should be serious, stern, unshaken, things like that... Except when they disobey and fall like Aletha had!

It makes me so excited how freakin' taboo this is! Like, an angel and a human is already an abomination, but an angel and demon?! I can tell this story is gonna get intense... probably gonna have lots of conflict too!

@ ladyschrei
first off.. I love the longness of your comment... lol... thanks for the comment... it means a lot to us...

First I'd like to say that I really like the layout; the banner and background work nicely together.

The summary and story itself start off strong. I'm loving everything you've got going on. I know the whole angel/demon love interest, I see it a lot, but this is a completely new take for me by what I'm reading so far.

I also really dig the names. Alexiel and Aletha, to be exact. They're so original.

I might be confused, but Lilith was claimed to be real, right? She was Adam's first wife, but refused to lay under him during sex and was cast out by God, and married Satan? I swear I read that somewhere and I'm not crazy XD Anyway.

In chapter two, I'm loving the names of the angels as well. The fact that they feel others presence adds to the story.

I also love how Michael is described as being handsome, but no other description is really given. I think that helps add to his angel persona.

I love that she thinks Raphael is her soulmate. Great description with everything there.

And WOAH, Aletha is her sister? I wasn't expecting that at all.

Overall I'm super loving what the two of you have here! :)

This story is so interesting, I don't think I've read one like it before. I love the color scheme you guys have put, it goes well with the plot/theme of the story. Great job girls =]

@ Snowy!
thanks so much

I like how the story flows together nicely. I enjoyed reading this and cant wait to see what happens next. I also liked how they went with the story.

@ dizzy dreamer;
awww.. thanks

Let me start by saying I'm not a huge fan of fantasy stories because it's super hard for me to find one I can get interested in enough to keep reading. With that being said, this is an exception.

First, both of you write really well and it flows together from chapter to chapter. You guys don't write in two completely ways but instead similar enough while still being different. Neither of you have many - if any - mistakes and that's always amazing in a story.

Second, the story had me drawn from the summary and as I started reading, it kept me hooked easily. With Aletha being both Alexiel's sister and Damion's fiance to Damion's choice to throw her in the Lake of Fire and move on to torturing Alexiel, it's all wonderful twists.

I can't wait to find out where Alexiel and Damion go with the dreams and everything. Good job! :)

This story is amazing I can't wait to read the next update . I wonder how does alexs sister feel about Damon toying with alex ? idk update soon

I love this story I just read it all in one sitting