Flames in Heaven - Comments

Ch 19 awesome, will be reading the rest very soon!

This is fucking awesome and it keeps getting better and better. :) I like how Damion doesn't give a flying fuck about his fiance and he's such a playboy loving the night life. I have to admit I like Raphael too, the way he's overprotective for Alexiel and how much he loves her. He seems like the prerfect match for her even though she is scared of her feelings growing and that must be cause she doesn't want to be in the same situation as her sister if I'm right. Anyway, I love that story. Keep writing it so I can read more guys. :DDDD

@ sydni.
Thanks so much

Being Satan's son, the Antichrist, was the best role down in hell.
I loved that line. It made me chuckle. I think being the son of the Devil would be a very interesting thing, to say the least. I like how you incorporated a fallen angel from Heaven. I think you've both done a great job with this co-write. I've read plenty about bands or whatever, but this was something different, and I enjoyed it. Good job!

So sorry it took so long to actually comment on this, I'm sorry dear!

Anyways, I love the idea you have for this story. I can't say I like the layout all that much. The top picture was a bit distracting. I love the way both of you guys write. I didn't see any mistakes and overall I think you've both done a great job!