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  • apocketfulofposy

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    My God I love this story. It's beautifully written and I think you capture Sid really well. Love the term tiny humans!
    August 20th, 2013 at 10:33am
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    @ bxgurl95
    Haha I couldn't think of anything to say. I was so eager to post it I didn't bother waiting until I thought of something.
    August 12th, 2013 at 04:37am
  • bxgurl95

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    AH
    No author's note? This was as emotional as the first time they almost had sex lol. I can't even breathe jdkdnows shbsjsbsvendksnkskdodmdjfndkkd
    thanks for the quick update :)
    August 12th, 2013 at 03:57am
  • Carolynbennerr

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    Awhh I hope her and Sidney stay together and she can get better and take her meds and stuff
    August 7th, 2013 at 02:30pm
  • Cupcake1

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    Love it!
    August 6th, 2013 at 12:03am
  • Carolynbennerr

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    Amen for her being a flyers fan and working with the pens no way in hell I would would for them flyers all the way and ps I love this I just started reading and I love it (except for the penguins part but oh well)
    August 4th, 2013 at 06:43pm
  • Jordyn4

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    I really liked this chapter. Glad you shared it with us.

    I'm so glad Bea was able to share this information with Sidney. She shouldn't have to deal with this all on her own. And, as we would expect, Sidney was so sweet and caring.

    Can't wait for more. I really enjoy this story.
    August 3rd, 2013 at 05:21am
  • bxgurl95

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    WOOHOO'
    August 3rd, 2013 at 01:31am
  • theoairplane

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    @ Thatmom
    Thank you so much! I am so relieved to know that it didn't come across as completely ridiculous or insensitive!
    August 2nd, 2013 at 11:55pm
  • Thatmom

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    Wow. You addressed a very real, very delicate subject in such an honest supportive way. Bravo to you for a very well written chapter.
    August 2nd, 2013 at 11:51pm
  • bxgurl95

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    Lol as soon as I get the email on my phone I stop and read the chapter. this story is addicting
    August 2nd, 2013 at 04:09pm
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    @ bxgurl95
    You are so fast! I'm always impressed by how quickly you reply. I love it!
    I should have an update very soon, I wrote a chapter and then decided to write this one as a way to better connect the two.
    August 1st, 2013 at 02:08am
  • Kaly18

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    Beau scared the crap out of me too! Holy moly. Geno cracked me up in this one
    August 1st, 2013 at 02:06am
  • bxgurl95

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    You know I absolutely adore this story, and I'm happy that someone has found them out lol, adds a bit of drama. They are so comfortable with each other which makes it sweet to read, but obviously at some point her insecurities were going to come up. Can't wait for the next update!
    August 1st, 2013 at 02:06am
  • Jayess

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    A great explanation of makeup for some. The security between doing things for oneself is very sexy.
    July 30th, 2013 at 02:17pm
  • bxgurl95

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    I totally loved this.. again. These two are very coupley but it's very sexy at the same time. I like that she keeps pairing the envelope and doing things we (and he) doesn't expect.
    July 22nd, 2013 at 08:59am
  • staygold87

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    I nearly forgot that the protagonist's name was Beatrice, and with the great update, I was caught off-guard when I read 'Bea'- which is my nickname as well- a first that I share an awesome name with a character! Love the strength of the character, like personality wise and can't wait for another update. :)
    June 27th, 2013 at 04:16am
  • bxgurl95

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    But Sid's not going to break you heart silly girl! Love the detailed updates :)
    June 25th, 2013 at 07:23pm
  • Thatmom

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    Loved the update!!
    June 25th, 2013 at 06:11pm
  • bxgurl95

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    YES *hot* the tension between these two. I can't wait for the next chapter. Also I like that Geno's getting some attention too
    June 6th, 2013 at 06:10pm