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As a native New Yorker (and a person who knows the family who started Two Boots Pizza and made the journey there from school many afternoons) I could NOT be happier that it was featured in this story. Please update soon, you're killing me here! Here and Sid spending time together warms my heart
@ bxgurl95 That makes me so happy!!! I'm a sucker for the little details. While I'm no John Steinback in regards to description, I think detail and specificities make it all the more intriguing. I'm working on the next chapter now so I should be done within the next day :)
FYI I reread this chapter 3 times: 1 because I was just so happy oh updated, the next to get be gist if what happened in the chapter and then the last to pay attention to the detail. (Even the fact that you specified a 'Small box of tampons' since she was just buyi it for show; I really appreciate those kinds of things when I'm reading.) she went through leaps and bounds to avpid him and obviously it's just his nature that is irresistable lol ;) I can't wait to read more omg
@ mikeysrevenge Haha I have never read Fifty Shades of Grey. From what I've heard it's pretty wild though, I'd be thoroughly impressed with myself if I could pull that off lol.
@ bxgurl95 I am so glad you like!!! Thank you thank you thank you! I don't think I did much breathing while writing it to be honest. I had to take a few breathers to gather my thoughts and make sure I was still writing the story and not just falling into my own dream world.
Thank you for all your comments everyone! I love hearing from you guys it totally inspires me to write more frequently!
1. The Rebecca black reference was funny 2. Milk and honey Chapstick YES!!! I don't think I breathed during the entire time he was in the room. I've ready a lot of Sid fanfics but this has to be one of if not THE best. The main character is different than the typical girls that you'll see on these stories, but she's not crazy and eccentric she's real and realistic. Things are progressing but at the same time are moving slowly in the chapters because of your use of description and detail. Ugh I love love LOVE this and so happy this was on the homepage. And he's a peefect mixture of sweet Sid and bossy Sid. (My lawd if Sid was ever near my room *drool* *faint*) you say the scene wasn't your forte, you coulda fooled me. Keep those updates coming please!
ohhh I liked the addition of Millie - I think there should be more drama involving her :) PS: fantastic update and you better update this again very soon please :)