April 5th, 2015 at 06:40pm
Stay, Stay, Stay - Comments
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I'm so glad they are at such a good place in their relationship. They make a sweet family:)April 1st, 2015 at 09:37pm
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@ Jordyn4
I get what you're saying, but I think a lot of that has to do with their personalities. As a character Sid is more likely to take the first step, while Bea is stubborn and more emotionally driven (their break up is an example of this.) The other aspect of this is that it is all written from the perspective of Beatrice, so we don't get to see him being angry as much as we see her side. Of course what she said was hurtful, but he is far more rationally driven than she is in that moment, which is what Shirley says to him. I think in this situation particularly too, Sid gets why she's upset. She's lost her sense of control over things and because they're so alike he can relate to that which is why he's a bit more forgiving, although to be realistic they're both pretty quick to forgive the other.
They're at a point in their relationship where they both know exactly what to say to hurt the other, and that argument is a prime example of it. Fortunately though, the story isn't over and things are never dropped as quickly as it seems ;)
I'm glad you're enjoying it though! I love feedback like this because it gives me a chance to take a look into it all from a different perspective. I'm definitely not defending Bea though, because I often think the same kind of thing.March 18th, 2015 at 10:07pm -
I really like this story and the characters you have created, but I sometimes get the impression Sid is taken for granted by Bea. Throughout this story I feel like they have both made mistakes but Sid seems to take the brunt of the blame and is often left to apologize and try to fix things that aren't solely on him.
In this chapter Bea and Sid both said some things that hurt the other but Sid is left to fix things, and Bea hardly acknowledged that saying Sid isn't good at being there to support his wife and kids was probably extremely hurtful. To me that is probably one of the most hurtful things you can say to someone. I know that is someone said that about me I would be devastated.But Bea didn't even mention it after. She slipped in a quick sorry and then let Sid do all the apologizing.
Relationships are hard and there will always be times where one member may need more support than they other, but if you are the one always taking the blame or being taken for granted, or being responsible for fixing things, it will eventually take a toll on the relationship.March 18th, 2015 at 03:48am -
Such a lovely chapter!
Loved the whole "smell the baby thing"
Can't wait to read more xoMarch 15th, 2015 at 09:41am -
@ Rhanson
It'a not the end :) I promise!February 24th, 2015 at 06:52am -
@ Jayess
Thank you :D
I am so incredibly pleased to hear that!!
No babies for me yet, but I'm glad I will have some idea of what to expect :)February 24th, 2015 at 06:49am -
Wow! You don't have kids? I'm super impressed, because you nailed, absolutely nailed natural, unmedicated labor and delivery. Well done!February 24th, 2015 at 06:17am
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I love this story!!! You did such a great job with the labor and tho is coming from a mom! Granted my labor wasn't at home and i had a C-sectionFebruary 6th, 2015 at 07:50am
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I'm so in love with this story!! I really hope this isn't the end... You're a wonderful writer!:) don't leave us hanging for too long without an update!February 5th, 2015 at 05:33pm
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You did good with this scene! Ending was written beautifullyFebruary 5th, 2015 at 10:05am
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Awwww yaaaaay! So cute!February 4th, 2015 at 10:42pm
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Love ♡February 4th, 2015 at 10:01pm
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Yayyy it happened!!!February 4th, 2015 at 10:01pm
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Perfection. Such perfection. I cried!February 4th, 2015 at 07:43pm
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Yes I am so happy she had the baby. I really liked this chapter because I could feel the intimate energy. Great job.February 4th, 2015 at 06:18pm
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I really liked the update, so happy to see Sidney losing his calm. So happy the baby's finally here, although poor Beau looking like he wanted to be anywhere but there.February 4th, 2015 at 05:36pm
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@ Thatmom
@ bxgurl95
Neither can Bea! ;)
Soon!! I am so excited to finally be able to share it with you guys!February 3rd, 2015 at 11:07pm -
Can't wait for the baby to be here!!!February 3rd, 2015 at 01:18pm
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Can't wait for the baby to come!February 3rd, 2015 at 10:12am
Brava!