Asylum - Comments

Sad this story is over. :(

Glad George got what he deserved!!

Can't wait to read your new story!

Oh, my God.

It's over.

Do you realize that this story has existed for almost exactly as long as we've actually known each other?????? Woooooow.

So I'm very proud of Hayley for coming into her own. She was a scared meek little thing, but she became strong with the help of the Avenged family and that strength showed up in the nick of time! She couldn't have chosen a better place to shoot him. Lol. That's worse than death for him. She and Matt are going to live happily ever after. <3 Beautiful ending. Fan-fucking-tastic. Kudos. Now onto your blog to see what's next!

@ RavenArtist93
thank you for continually commenting on it!! i really appreciate it, my dear :D

*CRYING BALLISTICALLY*
It's over!?
B-But it was so good! D':
Such a damn good story and what a fucking badass ending!
I was cheering when Hayley pulled the trigger...and of course, the bullet landed on his dick.
But the sick fuck deserved it >:D
And that little snippet at the end about how the two defined 'asylum': beautiful.
That was so sweet that it made me gush ^_^

BRAVO BRAVO!
Such a great story!
Thank you so much for keeping me entertained :)
_{I wish I could give you a cookie now...}

I fucking hate George, ugh.
That bastard needs to be castrated and strangled until his neck snaps >:C
_{Let Matt be the honors in that loll}
Fuck, Matt better hurry and find her!
I really really love how suspenseful this is and you always keep me at the edge of my seat, which is amazing :)
Can't wait for more! :D

Oh God. They have to reach her in time. I just...I won't be able to handle it if this ends badly. It will break my heart. I just want something to go right for Hayley for once!

Should have known it would have been him!
I hope Matt and that officer can find her!
Please update soon!

That George fucker needs to die already. He's been ruining Hayley's life for way too long. And I really hope Matt doesn't blame himself. Yes, he did fuck up a little bit with the whole "I'm your brother's legal guardian so I get to say what he does blah blah blah" but Hayley should've known better than to go out and drink. But, none of that really matters now. I just really hope they find her is good shape! Update soon! xx

Holy cow!!
I hope they can find her!!
Please update soon!!

Shit! That's really all I can say...Poor Matt. It took alcohol poisoning and her being hospitalized for him to finally start realizing things and listening to other people when they tell him stuff about Hayley, and now, he's finally getting his stuff straight and she goes missing. >.< I hope they find her quickly, because I don't think anything good can come of her escaping while she's in this state.

Oh my god!
This whole chapter was depressing, I'll put it to that.
I did expect Hayley to come home a bit...off.
But dear god, I never expected her to drop to the floor from alcohol poisoning...like holy crap.
But what got me more, was that she was gone from the hospital!
That was a tease of a cliffhanger there! lol
I feel really bad for Matt though..
Dear god, I hope they find her :'C

I can't wait for the next update!
This story is amazing, sweetie!
You never disappoint me <3

Oh no!! What have you done Matt?!
Please update soon!!

I'm going to need Matt not to be an idiot. *face palm*

Oh matt why?

@ Tobias Eaton
have you ever seen the tourettes dad on Youtube? i know it's completely effing fake, but some of his outbursts are the BEST. there was one "these fishsticks are hard as TITS". classic.

@ CharlieHunnam
I have that and i have "it sucks big black donkey dick " and "douche biting fuck titties"

@ Tobias Eaton
okay. maybe i'll just pass out from laughing too much. that was great. fucking shit tits. new line. most def. my most recent one was "holy fuckballs." i saw it on a thing and it said "holy fuckballs is this day over with yet?" so. yeah. it was mine hahaha

@ CharlieHunnam
Oh no, i meant to say it. Lol. And four is one fine hunk of man. Absolutley Uggghh. Please don't die, i don't wanna kill anyone

@ CharlieHunnam
Oh no, i meant to say it. Lol. And four is one fine hunk of man. Absolutley Uggghh. Please don't die, i don't wanna kill anyone

@ Tobias Eaton
HOLY FUCK ITS FOUR. ahahaha. <3 i love your name, dear!
dude. i don't know if it was a typo or if you meant to say it but "holy fucking shit tits" literally just had me DYING. omfg.