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  • The Detective

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    Oh my holy baby jesuses i was finally able to get cought up. Holy fucking shit tits this is an amazing book. Took all day to read it and it's absolutly amazing. I wanna punch matt in his gorgeous face though.
    April 28th, 2014 at 05:18am
  • SleepPatterns

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    Oh my god, Matt, baby I love you but you're a raging bag of dicks right now. I completely side with Hayley--her brother's education should definitely come first, and the fact that Matt brought up that he's D.J.'s guardian and not Hayley was probably the shittiest thing he could've said. Wow. Dick move.

    Besides him being a douchecanoe I still really want to see what happens. Your story is amazing (as always)! Update soon girly!
    April 27th, 2014 at 04:10pm
  • iseepurplepeople

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    Geez. I hope this story doesn't end depressingly Sad update soon!
    April 27th, 2014 at 02:35pm
  • RavenArtist93

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    @ CharlieHunnam

    Aww your welcome :'D
    I try not to be psycho-bonkers-crazy in the comments..
    But at times, I can't help it xD
    I get too excited!
    Even though I really don't want this story to end (*sniff sniff), I can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^
    April 27th, 2014 at 08:17am
  • CharlieHunnam

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    @ RavenArtist93
    your comments are seriously the best<3 thank you SO SO SO much, my love!!

    @ Mind_Riots
    i'm so glad you found it!! oh man! you're FAVORITE!? balls. i better live up to expectation, then!
    April 27th, 2014 at 07:42am
  • RavenArtist93

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    Even if the five comments don't come in time,
    Please please PLEASE, I beg of you to update this.
    This story is so amazing and I would die if you never update D':

    This chapter was heartbreaking.
    Matt is...just not there. He doesn't understand and that is what is causing problems.
    Yet, Hayley is going through some deep shit too.
    Man, I am really anxious to know what will happen next.
    Please update darling :)
    I love your writing <3
    April 27th, 2014 at 07:30am
  • SleepPatterns

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    This story is so fucking good omg. I just sat here and read it all and it is now my favorite! Wonderful job, love. Can't wait until you update :)
    April 26th, 2014 at 09:58pm
  • shortperson

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    Ahh I'm happy things are better but I'm so worried about that last sentence Sad

    I love reading this cause it is not predictable at all!! Keep up the good work! Very Happy
    April 22nd, 2014 at 10:27am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    I'm glad things are looking up. And...sexy time is always good. ;)
    I'm nervous about what will happen in the next chapters. I've caught a glimpse of your thought processes and I sense a twist coming. Mr. Green Also, I think our co-write should be moving forward soon, considering the weekend we had. "How far can we go before it's no longer a bluff?" Unf! DEAD.
    April 21st, 2014 at 08:00am
  • scarhead4

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    So far i really have enjoyed reading this. Keep up the good writing:)
    April 21st, 2014 at 03:52am
  • RavenArtist93

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    At least they are less distant and things are smooth :)
    The sexy scene was rather adorable..and steamy ;)
    I can just imagine how incredibly drop-dead hot he looks throughout the whole chapter.
    My brain is such a whore...lol

    But once I read that last sentence,
    I feel a bit anxious now :C
    Things are going to get worse!?
    HOW BAD!? D:
    April 21st, 2014 at 02:47am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Haha, you whore! You know I meant my actual feline! :P

    Anyway, I hope she talks to Matt and he finds a way to make her feel better. Now, though, he kinda has a right to be pissed...because they needed to discuss what happened and she ran off and got drunk instead. These two, I just don't know what I'm going to do with them. Lol.
    April 15th, 2014 at 08:34am
  • RavenArtist93

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    Yeah I noticed that the comments disappeared for your story here.
    I mean I don't know why!
    This story is amazing! lol

    I nearly squealed when I saw it on my subscription updates xD
    yeah I'm that obsessed...

    At least you will have me to comment :3

    Anywho,
    I mean I can understand where Hayley is coming from.
    But its weird that she couldn't remember much.
    I guess the alcohol really is fucking with her head...like legit.
    But I hope things settle down and work out.
    I want the best for the two D:
    They are too damn cute as a couple!
    DON'T KILL THAT >:U lol

    Can't wait for the next chapter!
    April 15th, 2014 at 04:24am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Hope she knows Matt did it for her and not himself. :/
    Please update soon!!
    April 4th, 2014 at 12:34am
  • RavenArtist93

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    I can see why she is upset.
    Like her, I have trust issues as well.
    And when someone keeps a promise, they keep it.
    So if they break it, I would be pissed.

    But I hope it doesn't strain the relationship at all :C
    They are so cute together! Everyone makes mistakes
    April 1st, 2014 at 07:17am
  • ebonygrohl

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    Love this story :D
    March 31st, 2014 at 10:20pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    I sorta understand why she's upset, but I mean...Matt did it for her. This means she's keeping DJ, even though she doesn't have custody. I guess with all of her trust issues, and the promises he just made, his reasons for doing it don't matter right this second. Maybe after she calms down?

    And you have the name Lacey in there a few times when I think you meant Leana. Just letting you know. Smile
    March 30th, 2014 at 11:04pm
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Sex in the car... What's next? ;)
    Loved how he talked to her about everything.
    Please update soon!
    March 18th, 2014 at 01:51am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    I'm glad she decided to go home with him instead of doing something stupid. And I'm glad they talked...and had car sex. Lol. They are too great together. <3
    March 17th, 2014 at 10:52pm
  • synystarr

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    Love it
    March 14th, 2014 at 02:32pm