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  • CrazyPebbles21

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    March 14th, 2014 at 05:43am
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    Car sex!!! Yay they are cute. Very good story im still hooked
    March 13th, 2014 at 05:19am
  • RavenArtist93

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    Aww.
    This made me gush :'3
    You had me going at the end of the previous chapter lol but for this one, I was so happy :D
    That car sex scene was very sexy and steamy, I loved that.
    Very nicely written ;)
    And I just absolutely love Matt in here.
    He is so kind, loving, and very protective but in a "I love you and want to protect you" kind of way.
    It is very cute and romantic.
    I can't wait to see what happens next :)
    I always love this story <3
    March 13th, 2014 at 04:30am
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    Oh man what's going to happen next?
    I feel drama coming
    Update soon
    Amazing chapter
    March 7th, 2014 at 05:31pm
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Dkiypslhotoshostpshlslgoslyslysluljshprosyo
    That's all I can say!
    Please update soon!!
    March 6th, 2014 at 05:09pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Seriously, Matt had better not take this whole "I can act like I don't care better than you" thing too far before he talks to her. If he does, I fully expect Leana to kick his ass! He's being a total idiot when all he needs to do is ask her what's up. How can he not know that their three months apart has made her unsure? Douche.
    March 5th, 2014 at 08:23am
  • RavenArtist93

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    No!
    He better not be doing what I think he is doing >:C
    If he is, I will find my way in that story and kick his sorry ass.
    Argghhh....poor Hayley T_T
    Man...all the emotion being put into her is really driving her insane...same with me.
    I'm anxious to know what happens next but I don't know how much longer I have to wait D:
    March 5th, 2014 at 05:15am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Poor Hayley. That's just so much for her to take in. I can't blame her for using alcohol to dull...well, everything. Matt was right, though. He couldn't have left at a worst time. Sad I hope that she doesn't do anything drastic during these last two weeks, but I'm sure something will go wrong when Matt's not around to help, whether it be her own fault or something beyond her control. Loved it, woman!
    February 25th, 2014 at 08:07am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    February 21st, 2014 at 08:56pm
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    LOVED IT!!!!
    I hope nothing happens to Hayley and Matt's relationship...
    Please update soon!!
    February 21st, 2014 at 08:55pm
  • RavenArtist93

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    Wow...
    I mean I can understand where Hayley is coming from and why she is using alcohol as a way out (not like I ever did it, I'm just putting out a point there).
    She's going and has gone through the worst crap than even Matt could realize.
    And what's worse is that he is on tour and she is left without him.
    So to prevent tears and emotional pain, she uses the alcohol...
    Man...the whole time I was thinking she would pass out from alcohol poisoning because of how you described her drinking..
    I'm glad she didn't but I have a feeling it may come.
    Or since she knows how to work a gun, a very life-risking decision might come to her mind when drunk and a gun in the hand..
    Yikes :C

    Can't wait to read more! :D
    February 21st, 2014 at 02:30pm
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Poor Hayley. :(
    So glad Matt is there to help her when she needs it!
    Please update soon!!
    February 17th, 2014 at 06:50pm
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    Amazing chapter
    February 9th, 2014 at 04:10pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    I've had one panic attack in my life, and that's pretty much exactly how it was. I was in the room with my uncle when he passed away and just...melted down. Anyway, I love that it's Matt who can always calm her and chase away her nightmares. It's good that she's going to have him by her side when she has to deal with the police because that is going to be one hell of a hurdle.
    February 9th, 2014 at 11:31am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Ahhhhhhhh!!! She remembered!!!!
    Amazing chapter also!!
    Please update soon!!
    January 31st, 2014 at 07:01pm
  • litldevil928

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    Wow... im not usually one for avenged stories but this is amazing.... started reading yesterday and finished the most recent chapter a second ago. You are very talented i cant Wait for the next chapter please update soon!!!
    January 31st, 2014 at 02:38pm
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    Amazing chapter
    January 31st, 2014 at 01:59am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm so happy! Leana is right: they're meant for each other. But yes, there is still a lot to discuss, and she still has a lot to sort out. Everything coming back isn't good, unfortunately. Can't wait for the next one.
    January 30th, 2014 at 10:36am
  • sweetz144

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    This story is amazing. I literally started reading this thinking it would be boring but I just finished the last chapter and it was....oh my God it was just amazing beyond words. Seriously, your writing is amazing, so much detail and you definitely kept me interested throughout this whole thing. Please update soon:)
    January 22nd, 2014 at 07:25am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    I fucking love Leana! Mr. Green I'm glad that everything is working out, but obviously, I wish she could remember all that happened with Matt. *sigh* Update ASAP!
    January 20th, 2014 at 05:34am