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  • Star Angel

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    update soon like right now please
    May 3rd, 2013 at 09:38am
  • Tholomew's Harlot

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    I really like this story so far! Def keep updating!!
    May 3rd, 2013 at 05:17am
  • A Decade in the Sun

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    *Comment Swap* I really love A7X but always avoid reading fanfics about them for some reason :/ anyway this is really good so far and you've one me over! I like the descriptions and the way Harper talks. Harper is a beautiful name too. I like the layout, it's simple but very beautiful. In chapter 1 when she listed the different things about herself you mentioned how she was 10 starting menstruation - I don't think that's weird at all seeing puberty starts between 8-16 and I was 10 starting like most girls my year :)
    May 1st, 2013 at 09:02pm
  • A Decade in the Sun

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    *Comment Swap* I really love A7X but always avoid reading fanfics about them for some reason :/ anyway this is really good so far and you've one me over! I like the descriptions and the way Harper talks. Harper is a beautiful name too. I like the layout, it's simple but very beautiful. In chapter 1 when she listed the different things about herself you mentioned how she was 10 starting menstruation - I don't think that's weird at all seeing puberty starts between 8-16 and I was 10 starting like most girls my year :)
    May 1st, 2013 at 09:02pm
  • A Decade in the Sun

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    *Comment Swap* I really love A7X but always avoid reading fanfics about them for some reason :/ anyway this is really good so far and you've one me over! I like the descriptions and the way Harper talks. Harper is a beautiful name too. I like the layout, it's simple but very beautiful. In chapter 1 when she listed the different things about herself you mentioned how she was 10 starting menstruation - I don't think that's weird at all seeing puberty starts between 8-16 and I was 10 starting like most girls my year :)
    May 1st, 2013 at 09:01pm
  • shanafiction

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    Awesome story so far(:
    April 30th, 2013 at 07:23pm
  • Star Angel

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    love this
    April 30th, 2013 at 09:50am
  • Seza

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    :) please update it, love reading it
    April 28th, 2013 at 07:02am
  • Seza

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    :) please update it, love reading it
    April 28th, 2013 at 07:02am
  • Seza

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    :) please update it, love reading it
    April 28th, 2013 at 07:02am
  • teenjalex

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    I really like this..<3
    April 27th, 2013 at 06:27pm
  • delirium.

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    I really like the summary, you gave just enough information about her to give us that mysterious feeling. I really love the first chapter two, I am completely subbing because I just can't wait to know what's going to happen and how exactly she's different. :3
    April 27th, 2013 at 04:43pm
  • Lady.V.

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    "Something is just well, off about her." I think you should take the well word off. It has a better hearing without it. I liked the summary and the story's title screams that this is a serious story but I don't know yet if that was what you wanted. It seems interesting so far so I subscribed here too. :)
    April 27th, 2013 at 04:41pm
  • Lady.V.

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    "Something is just well, off about her." I think you should take the well word off. It has a better hearing without it. I liked the summary and the story's title screams that this is a serious story but I don't know yet if that was what you wanted. It seems interesting so far so I subscribed here too. :)
    April 27th, 2013 at 04:41pm
  • psychotic secrets;

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    Ooooooh! This sounds really cool. I like how the summary brought me in. Totally going to sub.
    April 27th, 2013 at 03:01am