AWW. I love how nervous she is around him. I wish that Kelly wouldn't have pushed her for more information like that. Very rude.
I think this is a good story, definitely think it has a lot of potential and that you are doing a great job with it. I will say that it is very jumpy. I think that there should've been a bit more dialogue between Jimmy and Harper before they decided to meet each other's families. Moving a bit fast, so hopefully you touch on that. I'm eager to see how things go for them, and if she finds out who her family is. Better yet, I hope she truly finds herself, because she seems like she is very lost, due to the fact that she doesn't know who her birth parents are.
What's up with Kelly huh? N'aww I can just tell they're going to make the cutest couple! Can't wait to see how she fits in with the rest of the band. More soon :D
Harper and Jimmy are so adorable! Lol. I honestly loved the date chapter; you were right, it was CUTE! And I loved his reasoning for her meeting his parents first. Haha! Made sense. I've recommended and subscribed! Can't wait for Wednesday :-)
First of all, love the banner and layout! :) Love her name, love all the names actually. She has an awesome job! I'm well jel! Haha. Ahhh she's interviewing the guys! Oh Jimmy Harper and Jimmy sitting in a tree K-i-s-s-i-n-g! :P Aww the date was super cute! Sigh. They're wonderful together. :D recced, and subbed
Hey so I read up until when Jimmy was taking her out on the date so far! I LOVE Jimmy fan fictions almost as much as I love Matt fictions lol. I also like that you didn't make Harper out to be a crazed fan girl and that she was professional being around famous bands. I'm definitely subscribing!
Awww this is so cute! I do love this so far, the relationship that Jimmy and Harper have already is really sweet. It's good that she trusts him so much already and she can tell him about her family life and how she doesn't really know who she is. I want some more pretty please!
This was a lovely story, but the only thing I had a problem with is when some of the paragraphs weren't spaced out enough, but other than that I really enjoyed the story. It has a really nice flow to it. :)