*Comment Swap* I really love A7X but always avoid reading fanfics about them for some reason :/ anyway this is really good so far and you've one me over! I like the descriptions and the way Harper talks. Harper is a beautiful name too. I like the layout, it's simple but very beautiful. In chapter 1 when she listed the different things about herself you mentioned how she was 10 starting menstruation - I don't think that's weird at all seeing puberty starts between 8-16 and I was 10 starting like most girls my year :)
*Comment Swap* I really love A7X but always avoid reading fanfics about them for some reason :/ anyway this is really good so far and you've one me over! I like the descriptions and the way Harper talks. Harper is a beautiful name too. I like the layout, it's simple but very beautiful. In chapter 1 when she listed the different things about herself you mentioned how she was 10 starting menstruation - I don't think that's weird at all seeing puberty starts between 8-16 and I was 10 starting like most girls my year :)
*Comment Swap* I really love A7X but always avoid reading fanfics about them for some reason :/ anyway this is really good so far and you've one me over! I like the descriptions and the way Harper talks. Harper is a beautiful name too. I like the layout, it's simple but very beautiful. In chapter 1 when she listed the different things about herself you mentioned how she was 10 starting menstruation - I don't think that's weird at all seeing puberty starts between 8-16 and I was 10 starting like most girls my year :)
I really like the summary, you gave just enough information about her to give us that mysterious feeling. I really love the first chapter two, I am completely subbing because I just can't wait to know what's going to happen and how exactly she's different. :3
"Something is just well, off about her." I think you should take the well word off. It has a better hearing without it. I liked the summary and the story's title screams that this is a serious story but I don't know yet if that was what you wanted. It seems interesting so far so I subscribed here too. :)
"Something is just well, off about her." I think you should take the well word off. It has a better hearing without it. I liked the summary and the story's title screams that this is a serious story but I don't know yet if that was what you wanted. It seems interesting so far so I subscribed here too. :)