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  • rizzoabby

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    Thank God!!! I was so scared for her! Thanks for updating! I'm glad that Jon proved he can take care of her instead of always having it be the other way around. I would love to see them get back together and have it be more balanced :)
    July 28th, 2013 at 06:38am
  • polishpearlsparis

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    Soooooooop glad she's alive, safe, and Jon was there for her. Can't wait to read the next chapter. :)
    July 28th, 2013 at 05:03am
  • Ms.Smith28

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    Oh thank god!!!!!!!! Great story I love it finally read all of this! Please update! I think they need a break away from the world to be with each other!
    July 28th, 2013 at 03:13am
  • Sarahsmom01

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    Please please please update want to know what is happening...
    July 27th, 2013 at 08:28pm
  • whoa.itsjess

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    omg! you suck! lmao I think I'm going to be the lady behind the computer lol! Just kidding, you're awesome just like this story! now please, pretty please update soon :)
    July 27th, 2013 at 09:58am
  • Ahabs

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    Ommmgg please update I need to know what happened!!!!!
    July 27th, 2013 at 08:11am
  • laaauren

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    Oh please please please update!!! This is insane!
    July 27th, 2013 at 04:44am
  • rizzoabby

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    I agree with @hkychk! Need to know what's going to happen next, please update!!
    July 27th, 2013 at 04:10am
  • hkychk

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    You can't just end it there!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update asap!!!!!!
    July 27th, 2013 at 02:53am
  • Hawkchick85

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    Really you have to leave it there!!!!! That's so mean!!! I really hope that she's okay. I can't wait to see what Jonathan is going to do when he gets there. I love this, PMS
    July 27th, 2013 at 02:48am
  • apocketfulofposy

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    How can you leave it like this?! Nooooo!
    July 26th, 2013 at 10:56pm
  • umngrrl

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    post again tonight please????
    July 26th, 2013 at 10:50pm
  • saudade.

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    Am I the person that's going to beat you? Because I'm thinking about it! Lol, I decide, 'I think I can manage a chapter with my migraine.' Mandy, you're awful and I hate you for making me love these stories so much. You owe me fluff. A whole lotta fluff.
    July 26th, 2013 at 10:48pm
  • Shootergirl

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    Talk about cliff hanger....
    July 26th, 2013 at 09:59pm
  • polishpearlsparis

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    I really really want to know what happens next. Update soon! :)
    July 26th, 2013 at 09:49pm
  • rizzoabby

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    I'm really glad how Brooke handled the situation with John...no way should someone put up with that! I'm sure they will make it through, but I'm glad you're writing it in a realistic way. Thanks for updating :)
    July 26th, 2013 at 04:53am
  • Thatmom

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    Bravo Brooke!!! Good job standing up for yourself!!!! But I do think they are meant to be together:)
    July 26th, 2013 at 04:02am
  • kendra-rae

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    Love It <3 cannot wait for more !!
    July 7th, 2013 at 03:30am
  • kendra-rae

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    Love it <3
    June 27th, 2013 at 09:08pm
  • Hawkchick85

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    I love this, I hope he doesn't become to big of a Jerk!! I love this and I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS
    June 26th, 2013 at 03:53am