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  • LDW Choice

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    so, I caught on to your story yesterday and I really like it. But now that I'm not reading it on a mobile version of mibba, I realized that your layout it a little difficult to read. It may just be me, but I wanted to let you know. Great job with the story!!
    May 29th, 2013 at 04:30am
  • pogo5176

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    Love comment at the end for grandma....totally something that my great aunt would say about my uncle
    May 27th, 2013 at 06:43am
  • Jayess

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    mmmm, secret wedding plans I have to say might be the best wedding plans there are! Because TBH, planning a wedding can be so stressful that you just want to give up and elope. Esp. when people want elaborate and over the top weddings, they forget what's important and all you need: a bride, a groom, an officiant, a wedding license, and a couple of witnesses. Everything else is just gravy. Although I think good food is a must. Everything is better when you're well-fed.
    May 25th, 2013 at 05:53pm
  • pogo5176

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    the ending was really cute
    May 25th, 2013 at 04:42am
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    the ending was really cute
    May 25th, 2013 at 04:42am
  • Thatmom

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    So so cute!!!
    May 24th, 2013 at 04:08am
  • saudade.

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    Surprises from Jonny! This story always makes me laugh or smile. Whether it's from cuteness or awkwardness. I'm curious to see what happens with her family...
    May 24th, 2013 at 02:42am
  • shtephx3

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    I loves it Very Happy
    May 22nd, 2013 at 08:22am
  • M1295

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    I absolutely love this story! Can't wait for more! Hope you update soon!!
    May 22nd, 2013 at 05:24am
  • Thatmom

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    Sweet story:)
    May 22nd, 2013 at 05:07am
  • Kare

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    I like the way you portray his awkwardness
    May 21st, 2013 at 06:24am
  • Dance2muse

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    I'm so glad you're going "back" to this story. The first one was too good to stop at 7 chapters!
    I'm not sure if I'm the only one but I have a really hard time reading it because of the font color with the background, is there anyway you could change to white or another color other than gray? Thanks! Can't wait to see what comes next!
    May 17th, 2013 at 07:09pm
  • KylieJames

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    Love it! I hope nothing too serious happened, can't wait to read more. Update soon!
    May 16th, 2013 at 04:10am
  • mvprelays

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    I can't wait to see what happens next! Hope she's ok...
    May 16th, 2013 at 02:00am
  • Jayess

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    A good start! Can't wait to see what the middle of the story is!

    Also, hope there's more Patrick Kane in this one, I like how you portray him (plus all the girlfriend-esque jokes the other players and everyone made in Awkward about him and Jon).
    May 13th, 2013 at 07:02pm
  • rehbein

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    Yay for a sequel!
    May 13th, 2013 at 03:36am
  • gcfansara1

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    So excited you are officially writing a sequel! Can't wait to read more of their budding relationship :) Update again soon !! :)
    May 12th, 2013 at 01:01am
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