June 28th, 2014 at 08:20am
Burn Me Like the Sun - Comments
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Okay so I haven't been able to review in a long time but these last few chapters have been amazing as per usual. This last chapter in a way surprised me but it didn't surprise me that she trusted him for not leaving her. I think that is beautiful and they are such odd people. I love Blake though her personality is so spit fire and hilarious. I can't wait for more! Update soon yeah.June 28th, 2014 at 07:06am
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@ NessinhaBLACKOUT
It makes me so happy to hear it!June 25th, 2014 at 06:35am -
Ommmmggg this chapter, no words can describe how excited I was about their kiss!June 25th, 2014 at 05:39am
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@ rebel.at.heart.
hahahaha I love this! Blake will bring up the pap in chapter 35 I believe, so we still have a ways to go. I'm just glad people seem like they won't be forgetting him any time soon! Thanks again man, really.
(Alsooooooo for some reason my reply to your comment on the last chapter didn't seem to be @ your user name, so I don't know if you saw it, but if you didn't, it's right above it! I only just noticed is all.)June 24th, 2014 at 07:56am -
Haaaaaah he had to wear her Newcastle kit that is golden, man
OH MY GOD SHE KISSED HIM OKAY SOMEONE CALL ME AN AMBULANCE
yes Blake yes yes yes
only now he seems reluctant and that makes me v nervous
i am super suspicious about that one pap all smiley actin' like he knows something. i'm really interested to see what he's going to mean later on though. can't wait for the next chapter!June 24th, 2014 at 07:43am -
@ AshleighRebekah
Thank you so much!June 23rd, 2014 at 09:11pm -
Awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter!!June 23rd, 2014 at 03:57pm
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@ sandrashameless
I promise the paparazzo is nothing more than your average background character! But that's not to say he's not important to Blake. Thank you!June 22nd, 2014 at 01:21am -
excuse me! that last paragraph has left me completely uneasyJune 21st, 2014 at 08:28pm
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@ Zen Molek
hahahaha And I love you very much a lot too. Thank you!June 21st, 2014 at 08:25am -
DaaaaaaaaaaaaaMN GIRL!!!!
I know you just gave us this but I already want more ugh
These two are just sickengly sweet and I love them very much a lotJune 21st, 2014 at 07:43am -
@ BecauseSheSaidSo
I'm glad you were pleased with the way I wrote the kiss! The pap at the end will come up again, but he won't show up again though. He's just your average background character. Thank you, thank you, thank you so much as always!June 21st, 2014 at 07:32am -
IT'S ABOUT FUCKING TIME
Well really I feel like this was just the perfect timing for them to kiss. The way you described it was really good; I like that you focused more on the thoughts and not on the physical actions happening. It makes it more than just "oh they kissed finally". Really great job. c:
Also I'm kind of confused by the man at the end. Maybe I as the reader am supposed to be confused as to who he is. Just wondering the meaning of this strange man.
Really though, very impressed with this chapter; you never fail to amaze me. So so excited to read the next chapter.June 21st, 2014 at 06:45am -
@ a quarter and a kiss
You're welcome.(:June 10th, 2014 at 06:57am -
@ NessinhaBLACKOUT
Ahwww, thank you so much!June 7th, 2014 at 11:43pm -
Lou is so sweet, i loved this chapter!June 7th, 2014 at 02:10pm
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I'm so glad that the set up for the next chapter has you so excited. Thanks, man. A lot. It really means so much to read comments like yours. Makes those tough days when writing's hard a bit better.June 7th, 2014 at 08:13am
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no omg the conversation in the car I'M DYIN'
he's being so sweet and i'm so so glad things are starting to get a little bit better. which makes me a teeeensy bit (okay a lot) excited for the next chapter since it's a big one. ugh you kill me JulianJune 7th, 2014 at 07:52am -
@ xiheartwolves
Thank you so much!June 7th, 2014 at 06:38am
Dude, you're totally fine! Thank you so much for leaving me a comment. I always love hearing what you think. We've still got a ways to go and a lot of conflict to get through but I'm glad you're enjoying it so much!