Demons - Comments

I really liked this story! I didn't see that ending coming, and would love a sequel! Thanks for sticking with it :)

OMG I need the sequel right now!!!
I have so many emotions about this story I feel so as for john right now not that I'm excusing his behavior about messing around on Jenna but he should just be honest with her.

I'm not a fan of Jonathan at the end, here. He played with Madison and her emotions while still with his girlfriend. That's shitty behavior towards both Madison and Jenna. He chased after Madison without breaking up with Jenna first. Regardless of how much he says he loves madison, that's completely uncool. You don't emotionally fuck around on your girlfriend and you certainly don't kiss old exes, 'true' love or not.

Looking forward to the sequel!! Still want her and Pat to get together though...not a fan of Jon in this story at all.

oh my god!! i loved the ending even if it broke my heart. i can't wait for the sequel!

Such a sad ending. I hope things work out for Madison and Jon in the sequel

Oh my. That's all I have. My heart hurts for them. Cannot wait for the sequel.

I'm glad this ended this way. She needs to heal and grow stronger. But I am hoping they get their happily ever after together in the sequel:)

As much as I love happy endings, I'm glad that this is the way this one ended. I only started reading this a few weeks ago, but I can honestly say that it was one of my favorite stories and I can't wait to read the sequel to find out what happens next and where you'll pick up.

ahh... can't believe he was right there and didn't get to talk to her

Aw, I was really hoping he would've made it on time to stop her!! I hope Madison and Jon end up together. Can't wait for the sequel!

I really hope she picks Toews. Sure he screwed up and he admits that but he should get a second chance with her.

I'm rooting for Pat...Jon always gets the girl!

ahsjskkdksak!!!! i just want her to be happy this is so hard but i'm secretly hoping jon will someone go after her. ;__;

This was so heartbreaking, I'm really really looking forward to the last chapter to see what she finally chooses!

GOD I LOVE THIS STORY I'm so happy there will be a sequel!!!!!!!!! Very very very great work here I'm dead-serious :)

This fanfic is too much for me. The fact that it brought tears to my eyes, and a story hasn't done that for me in such a long time, is amazing. Even just the strong anticipation I've had for this fanfic is overwhelming- I cannot explain the happiness I feel when this is updated. I'm so sad that the end is coming, but your fanfic took me on a wonderful journey, so it was all worth it.

Thank you for writing one of the best fanfics I've ever read, gurl, and I'll be looking forward to your James Neal story. (P.S. I love your Tyler Seguin story too.)

So....besides the fact that chapter 17 brought me to tears with the realness of it, I loved it. I do wish for a happy ending for Madison though :(

Love the update! I really want Maddie to get back with Jon. They need eachother

Kane will help her