wow.. that was a loaded chapter. The depth of emotion you show in your writing is just mind-blowing. That's what you do, you show things there is not one thing simply told.
Oh my. My heart strings were snapping with this chapter. I don't know if I would want her back with Jon. And if he does save her again, Pat would be heartbroken. I'm not sure Jon deserves her. He's a dick. But sometimes love isn't clean cut. Sometimes it's gritty and sucks. But Pat, oh Pat, he's gonna get hurt and I don't want that. (I'm not even attracted to him and I want him happy in this story).
Wow. Just wow. Who did Shawzer call? I'm gonna guess Jon for some reason. I think if Pat thought he stood a chance he would have followed her.
Oh my gosh!! I can't wait to see what happens! Will she pick Jon or Pat? Personally, I am starting to really want her and Pat to start something up :) Please do a sequel as well!!!
So, I finally caught up! I have read this entire story in the matter of about four days. You are an amazing writer and I absolutely adore Madison. I hope she finds someone new though or something happens.
I really like the idea of Pat and Maddie together, and I kind of want to see them give a relationship a shot! Obviously I understand how they feel about Jon, but it'd still be interesting to see what could come of that. Looking forward to another chapter!
I absolutely love this story. I can't tell if I would rather her and Jon get back together, or for her and Pat to see what could be. I totally understand the entire problems though.