March 19th, 2014 at 08:53pm
Demons - Comments
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Still wanted her with Toews but the Kaner/Madison relationship is kinda cute. Totally can't wait until the next chapter.March 19th, 2014 at 08:24pm
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Wow. That's all I can say. He's a jerk. Loving someone means doing things when you don't feel like it just because it will make your loved one happy. He needs to quit being selfish.March 18th, 2014 at 08:46am
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wow.. I almost cried. Good for her though sticking up for herself. And dammit good for Kaner for showing up and keeping his word. Making him an incredible fan even if he had felt down from what I assume was a losing game before hand he showed up to support her.
Can't wait to see where it goes.
Seriously I don't think her and jon should be together anymore I was so routing for them in the beginning but there is only so many times that you can stomp on someone when they are down.March 18th, 2014 at 03:56am -
wow.. I almost cried. Good for her though sticking up for herself. And dammit good for Kaner for showing up and keeping his word. Making him an incredible fan even if he had felt down from what I assume was a losing game before hand he showed up to support her.
Can't wait to see where it goes.
Seriously I don't think her and jon should be together anymore I was so routing for them in the beginning but there is only so many times that you can stomp on someone when they are down.March 18th, 2014 at 03:56am -
Wow. Loaded chapter, made me sad :( I'd like to see things work out between Jon and Madison, but I can understand why they can't. Please continue with this, though, it's a great story!March 18th, 2014 at 12:42am
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More chapters and sequel please!March 18th, 2014 at 12:13am
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Wooo, go Madison! I can't wait to see where this, or a sequel goes, and whether Kane decides to step in.. I was for her and Jonathan, but I agree with sidmalkin871 a bit. Either way good job and keep updating :)March 17th, 2014 at 08:35pm
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oh I was not expecting that! if you ever decide to write a sequel, I think it would be an amazing idea to write it with Kane's POV! and maybe think about him and Madison as a couple ;) because right now Jon really is an asshole and she doesn't deserve him. It's been 2 times now that he acts badly, it's about time Madison forgets him (in my opinion). Anyway, really good story that I very much enjoy reading :) continue with the good work and as usual, I look forward to read more!March 17th, 2014 at 08:25pm
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Oh no!!!! What an ass. Good chapter.March 17th, 2014 at 08:01pm
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I agree with knowname's comment. This is a really good story and I can't wait for more of this, wherever you decide to go with it, it will be awesome I'm sure.March 8th, 2014 at 03:01am
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No not her and Patrick!!!! I so wanted her to be with Jonathan.March 8th, 2014 at 02:50am
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wow.. amazingMarch 7th, 2014 at 09:48pm
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AH. I loved this. You may not know where you're going with it, but I think her indecisiveness is very realistic and very human. She'd been depressed for years, and a month ago she tried to kill herself. The world isn't a John Green story, realistically you are not going to meet someone and just because they fall in love with you, you will be fixed and everything is going to get better. Madison and Toews are complex characters and the way that you handled the last few paragraphs just kept the whole thing very relatable to the fact that we can use people to distract ourselves, but demons must disappear gradually. Wherever you go with it I can't wait for more.March 7th, 2014 at 07:22pm
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I hope she and Jon can find a way for both of them to be happy. I like Pat as the BFF to both of them:)March 7th, 2014 at 05:57pm
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Can't wait for more!March 3rd, 2014 at 07:28pm
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oh my god!! What is gonna happen with her and Jon?? Or are her and kane gonna try things out?! I love this story! please update again soonMarch 3rd, 2014 at 09:45am
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holy shiiiiit. is she going to feel all guilty now and like call jon pls say yesMarch 3rd, 2014 at 04:56am
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Holy shit! I can't handle this! I need an update soon!!March 3rd, 2014 at 02:16am
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uh oh.. a kane mads almost kissMarch 3rd, 2014 at 02:04am
Update soon please :)