Entice - Comments

The best thing ever Is seeing a new chapter posted so quickly. I loved this one so much. It got really intense there, and I cannot wait to see what is coming next

I always get so excited to see this story get updated. Please keep it going!

When I saw the notification in my email about Entice being updated I was super excited!!

Life throws you some curveballs so don't feel bad about not updating. There's no hate here. I'm super excited to see where this goes and whether they dig up the courage to tell everyone or get caught by someone!
THEY NEED TO REALIZE THEY BELONG TOGETHER lol.

I love this story❤️

I hate you a little for taking so long for to update because I absolutely love this. But The love outweighs the hate 2 billion fold.

I'm definitely intrigued to see where this is going. Even though it was a filler chapter, I did enjoy it. I don't think it was the best chapter you've written thus far, but I think it was still a great demonstration of their evolving relationship. I cannot wait to see what you have in store for these two. Will people find out? Will they start dating? Will they want different things?

Yea, basically, i'm stuck on this story like white on rice and I'm hoping more comes super soon

yessss this was so good!

Oh my god, yes

Yes still here! I swear I was just thinking about this one the other day. Loved it. I used to be a writer too and I ditched people for 3 years like an asshole but came back so I get you. Just wanted you to know you definitely still have readers!!

I hate you.
lol, jk, I just had to say about that after you said it in the author's note. I don't hate you, really. :P
But yay, I'm glad you finally posted an update! Was wondering what happened after that last one... you said you were on track but then you like disappeared again and I was really confused, lol. But I'm glad you came back; some authors just never update again and that's sad when that happens, some even leaving without indication of where they disappeared to. I'm glad you're not like that. :)
Hm... I'm just wondering at this point what's going to happen once Alex goes on tour? How will the two survive? lol. :O
But great job with the update! Also wondering what will happen if their friends find out about them. And it seems like Alex still has this side of him that he's still keeping from Faye, even beyond how he's acting with her now. O.o Will that eventually change?
Sorry, I'm a bit tired at the moment; usually I would leave more feedback after a long break. But just wanted to be sure to leave a comment to let you know I'm still here and reading. :)

I know it's been a whole but in still hoping that this will continue on since toy had so much planned for it and it's so enthralling.

Still following, 10 months later, dying for an update!!!!

Damn, I just love this story so so much!! I've been obsessed with it for the past like, three days haha. And it's so sad that you've stopped writing it, especially as you've just said you've got more planned! But even so, I love what's already hear to pieces, normally I don't get on with het stuff, especially with OCs, but I love this. So much :)

I'm sure this sentence appears in the comment section of this story quite frequently, but I thought I should mention it again: I don't usually read smut, but hot damn this is good. I really like the idea of the story being written in 3rd person but focusing on different characters each chapter such as Alex in chapter 1, Faye in chapter 2, and so on and so forth. I'm not sure if this was your intention, but the first few chapters I read before commenting feels a lot like Holly (Would You Turn Me On?) by the boys because Alex's lust for Faye is just so pressing, similarly to the song. Anyway, I love the way this is written and I love dominant Alex more than I care to admit. You have a great story so far!

To be honest, I've been meaning to comment on this story for a while and for some reason I just couldn't get myself to start reading it. I guess because, in my experience, smut always starts out slow and I've never really been into that. But yours didn't so yay! I've only read the first chapter but I figured I should comment before I put it off again.

Right off the bat we're seeing the relationship between Alex and Faye and I really liked that. They seem like they have a really cool dynamic between the two of them (if that makes sense, it felt awkward to type out ) and I'm interested to see how their relationship develops. It's also nice that we see a kind of "behind the scenes" look into what they both think about the whole friendship vs. relationship thing.

I like your writing style as well. It feels very "in the moment" to me and it's really cool to read.

But yes, good job, I'm excited to read the rest of it

I remember being so obsessed with this story. Seeing it updated felt like Christmas. The connection Faye and Alex have is so unbelievable. I hope they go somewhere alone because I can only image what they would do together.

I can't wait for the next update!

Seriously SO ready for an update on this story. This is one of my all time favorites.

I don't generally read
1. fanfiction
2. hetero
but hot damn this is good.

I can't wait for you to update! I keep checking back to see but still no luck. Thank you for providing us with this awesome reading material

I read all the way from the first chapter to what you have updated. Seriously, you're an amazing writer. :D

I love this story. It flows nicely and you hooked me with the first chapter. Not to mention that I love ATL! Seriously though, good job. I really felt the emotion in the first chapter. It made me want to keep reading. It flows nicely and the detail is well done. Good job and you have a new reader!

@ Katie Mosing
oh my goodness thank you! thats one thing I definitely tried to do with this story was make sure the dynamic was still fairly equal even though they are pursuing this kind of relationship. thank you so much!!

@ Lupy180
thank you! one of the biggest compliments you could give someone is that you could paint a picture with their words and I am extremely grateful! thanks again!