Entice - Comments

Okay, my favorite thing about this story is that it starts out with something that's actually interesting, instead of someone waking up and eating breakfast or something. We get to see right away that Alex has a thing for Faye, and I think it's absolutely adorable the way he gets so nervous around her like he can't even think. I also love that Faye is a confident girl who knows what to do to get to him. It's a nice change of pace from the innocent, know-nothings that usually appear in these stories.

I really enjoyed this story I love the description of the tension and emotion between Alex and Faye. The mature scenes are very vivid I could practically paint a picture with the words you used keep up the good work this was an awesome story I hope there ends up being more added to it.

that was the longest wait but it was worth it!

yaaas you're back!!

I think that this is one of my top ten favorite days in my whole life. I am so stoked this story is aliiiiiive again. It's one of my favorites, because I'm a perv like that.

But seriously. I'm really happy over here. You made a crappy week awesome

Im just happy this is updated.

So happy that this story is back(:

Yesss! This story is back!! Happy dance!

Oh my god, you're back! it feels like christmas

thank god you are back!!!! xx

This is my absolute favorite story up here!!!! So glad you're back!

OMG an update YASSSS. XD
I'm so happy you're inspired to write for this and update again! Yay! I can't wait to see where you take it!
I'm still here to read. :)

Now that is more like it! I am so glad you are back, because this is absolutely brilliant! ;)

I'm still holding out hope that this story will continue.

Can this story start up again I miss it!

I really miss this story. I hope you'll be back soon.

I miss it so much, come baaack </3

This is brilliant!! Update soon? :)

I'm hoping there will be more soon