Forever - Comments

@ LastAmericanGirl
That's what I was going for! (;

I felt kinda bad for Twitch...but in that you're being creepy get some help kinda way. Haha! Yay! For update! :)

@ lady of the sunshine
Thanks, I think....ahahahaha. <3

@ LastAmericanGirl
Isn't that right, though? I'm glad to hear you liked it!

@ Pinhead
Just for you! (;

@ cruel intentions
Twitch is pretty sketchy as it is! I'm thrilled that you like my stories. Loved your comment!

@ Gypsy Rose
It is intense, that's for sure. Thank you! (:

Wow this is amazing I love it. The intensity of it. I just want them to meet face to face already!!

Honey...I adore this!
This is honestly one of my favorite stories on this site.
I read the review on the prequel and I loved the idea of this.
I did think it was a little sketchy when it said that Benjamin couldn't actually see Twitch, but I gave it a try and I am so glad that I did.
I absolutely love this story.
You have such a creative mind, I love it.
Can't wait for more!
:)
<3

finally new chapter!!! yaaayyy!!

Twitch!!! Come back!! Geez, just when you think they'll finally be together...BOOM! He's gone. Haha. Loooved this update!

I have so many things to say about this update.
When I can get to my computer I'm gonna knock your socks off with my rambling.
Get ready.

This is actually a pretty unique idea. I don't think I've come across something like this on Mibba. It's interesting and you pull it off so brilliantly that I sat and read all twelve chapters even though I have other things that I needed to do before popping off for the night. There's just something about this which is so insanely dark and creepy that I just absolutely love it.

Twitch is the character that just sticks out the most from the story, with Marilyn being the supporting character in my opinion. It starts when she's young and naïve and sure, it feels like it'll be about her then, but as he let her down and subsequently left, it gradually turned into his story of how he wants to go back and see her but knows that he isn't good news for her and doesn't want her to be influenced by him or anything bad to happen to her.

I like your writing style throughout the story and couldn't really find anything to comment on in regards to that. Some of the chapters were quite long but I think that suits the story with how your style is and how it's not composed of all paragraphs but rather there's just lone sentences that really impact the reader with the message that they're giving the reader.

Before reading this, I did read the oneshot because you said it would make more sense but really, I don't think it matters too much. Sure, the oneshot features him before he found Marilyn, but the oneshot doesn't really include anything vital that can't be picked up in the story itself. Yes, it was good to find out about Benjamin, but the mystery surrounding Twitch's previous person he was in the mind of is a good element within this story.

Overall, I think this is absolutely brilliant. Your writing style is fitting and I loved each chapter that I read.

This was the best chapter I've read so far. It's so creepy, but so emotional and passionate at the same time. Ugh, I just love you and this story too much. Xxxxxxxxx

Read your blog post the other day. Sucks that you're having such trouble writing this story because I really like it. Even if it creeped me out a lil at first. haha
I hope you'll get through whatever it is that's giving you a hard time <3

can't wait for next chapter :)

I really like this. It was sad that he forgot about Benjamin though... :(

That was perf. You're perf. Marie is perf. Just...yes. I like.

I'm crying. You're the most precious thing alive. You totally surprised me, and I fuckin love it man. This was such an amazing chapter, I feel for Marie so much, she's so perfect. Everything about this is perfect. Thank you so much, you're the best friend ever xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx love you

AHHHHHHHHH I'M SO EXCITEDDDDD!!! aw poor marie though, that's so sad :( :( :(

I got done reading the most recent chapter, and bragged about how I read the best fanfiction on the internet to all my friends. This is exactly the kind of story I love. Demons and/or people thinking there are voices in their heads. I'm a bit messed up, but whatevs! Can't wait for the next chapter!

My stupid iPad commented twice and I don't know how to delete, so I've edited my comment to this. :D hahahaha xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox

This is making me so sad!! I love twitch so much. His sister.... Wow lol, but it works so well... Everything about this works so well!!!!!! I love you so much omg. I can't wait to read what you do next! Xoxoxoxoxxoxoxo

@ locals
Yeah, he is a bit of a sleazy, pervy man. ahaa
I'm glad that I'm able to do that! I feel like he's real sometimes, too... O_o <33