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  • ebony_goddess

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    Aw this was a sad chapter. I love it already. Hope you update soon :)
    June 16th, 2013 at 08:43am
  • Ne0nAbyss

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    In my opinion, I think the beginning is a bit choppy when I read it and since I struggle with my own sentence structure I can't really give you good advice; but I do love this story and I think it's really interesting so I'd love to see more.
    June 1st, 2013 at 01:25pm
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