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  • K.Monroe

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    Oh, my gosh. I love this story so much. Zacky's so hung up on Amber he doesn't even realize that Violet gives him all of that with nothing in return. True, she's only his friend but she loves him. She needs to tell the guys about what's going on with Craig. I'm sure they would understand. From what I've read she didn't do anything too terrible. She made a stupid mistake and she learned from it. I just hope nothing bad happens to Violet.

    Can't wait for another update.
    June 14th, 2013 at 06:13pm
  • LadyRaven

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    I love this story but sometimes I get so confused. I don't the whole Zach and amber thing, what the hell has she got that is so special? The violet situation is starting to make more sense, but i just wish she would talk to someone. If they are truly her friends then she should know that she can talk to them about anything.
    June 14th, 2013 at 03:52pm
  • HerNameIsAlice

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    I hope Matt tells and they follow her! Or at least only him! And what do pictures have to do with anything. I realize Craig has or had a rep but so what?
    June 14th, 2013 at 03:26pm
  • AshlynnTheRevLover

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    I don't want her hurts! I hope they found out soon.
    June 14th, 2013 at 02:32pm
  • AJ9

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    Oh please update soon xx.

    I want Violet to tell the guys .... and then they can kick Craig's arse!
    June 14th, 2013 at 01:48pm
  • fiction246

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    Oh my gosh awesome chapter!!! I can't wait to find out what happens!!!! I can't believe she won't just tell the guys!!! They can beat up Craig for her!!!
    June 14th, 2013 at 12:49pm
  • fiction246

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    Wow!!! Very interesting look at violets old life...and oh my gosh Craig is coming after her!!! Can't wait for more :)
    June 14th, 2013 at 10:32am
  • Haylie Jaed

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    I think I've been reading this all out of order, because Mibba sends me emails really delayed now. =/ But I'm still reading and liking, so that's something. =)

    Will be really interesting to see if this baby really is Zacky's.
    June 14th, 2013 at 10:21am
  • HerNameIsAlice

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    So Vi was an Amber once! But she seems so not bitchy and snobby. Zack should get punched in the face. I hope Amber is lying or that's not really his kid. Someone needs to show up unexpected to catch Craig. I don't want Vi to get hurt!
    June 14th, 2013 at 12:28am
  • AshlynnTheRevLover

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    Zacky or Matt need to find out before or during Craig visit
    June 13th, 2013 at 08:11pm
  • Bunny-on-Drugs

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    gosh darn woman has got to stop being stubborn and tell SOMEONE maybe val! she is going to regret it if she doesnt if craig takes her cause no one will know where or who took her
    June 13th, 2013 at 07:53pm
  • tedted5

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    This was an awesome way to wake up in the morning, to a new update on this story.. :) This story is getting intense and deffinatly has me sitting at the dge of my chair every time I read it. I just really hope that sooner more than later, Zack leaves Amber and realizes how much more he needs Violet than Amber... Gahhh... I know your updating frequently but please update again soon! I seriously can't wait to read the next chapter to find out if Craig finds Violet or not >.<
    June 13th, 2013 at 05:43pm
  • AJ9

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    Oh no! Craig's on his way to Cali! Please update soon xx
    June 13th, 2013 at 05:41pm
  • AshlynnTheRevLover

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    I love this story! But when will Zacky get rid of Amber? Does he really love her? I can't wait for the next update!!!!:) Keep up the good work and I like how you drag it out!!! <3
    June 13th, 2013 at 06:53am
  • vechkinfan1

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    THis is by far one of my favorite stories on here! Amazing job and I can't wait for more!!
    June 13th, 2013 at 05:29am
  • tedted5

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    This story is just pure fucking amazingness! I love it and its just...ugh.....amazing. You describe everything perfectly and you know just how to express the way the characters are currently feeling! You my friend, have an awesome talent! I cant wait for the next update because in all honesty, this story is getting juicy!
    June 13th, 2013 at 05:15am
  • Bunny-on-Drugs

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    completely understand why you drag stuff out its your story write it how you want i love it and ill keep reading until its done i just like to moan and groan because its that good and i cant wait to see what happens next! zacky is such a douche sometimes calling vi jealous puh lease! ambers a bitch and he needs to leave her
    June 13th, 2013 at 04:35am
  • heyjude;;;

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    OH MY GOD YOU FIGURED IT OUT.
    I DIDNT THINK ANYONE WOULD GET IT.
    YOU GET ALL THE AWARDS.
    June 13th, 2013 at 03:57am
  • Madam Shadows;

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    Hey! I actually like the pace you're going at! You reveal stuff in pieces which is basically why I love the story title too! Anyways, I adore this story! <3
    June 13th, 2013 at 03:45am
  • fiction246

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    Don't not worry about the messages you are getting!! I am really enjoying this story and I would not call it boring. There seems to be a lot about violet that we don't know and that is really exciting!!! I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes :) keep up the good work!!
    June 13th, 2013 at 03:03am