June 16th, 2013 at 07:15pm
Pieces - Comments
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I'm scared for zacky.June 16th, 2013 at 07:08pm
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Oh god! I can't wait for it to escalate!June 16th, 2013 at 06:59pm
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I don't like the way Craig threatened her!!! I'm scared for her and Zack!! Can't wait for more :)June 16th, 2013 at 02:24am
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I'm glad that Zacky and Violet are getting closer but I'm really worried about Craig. He's very sinister. Please update again soon xxJune 16th, 2013 at 12:25am
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No. No no no no no no Craig just GTFO and just die in a hole.
Violet should've had slapped Zack to put some sense on his mind and AMBER WTF ARE YOU DOING! Did she seriously thought no one would at least TRY to talk to him?
Vi and Zacky are cute together :3
This story keeps getting better and better and I can't wait to read more! =DJune 15th, 2013 at 11:26pm -
@ heyjude;;;
Thanks!June 15th, 2013 at 09:32pm -
When are they gonna see the mark for that shithead.June 15th, 2013 at 09:18pm
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@ Ravenhair24
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!June 15th, 2013 at 09:16pm -
Okay, so this chapter was awesome and the best birthday present ever! Can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!June 15th, 2013 at 09:02pm
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Amber is going to see them, isn't she?June 15th, 2013 at 08:55pm
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I love this story as well as the continuous updates. I really hope that Zack listens to Violet's words and kicks Amber to the side. Violet understands Zack perfectly and they meant to be together, but now with Violet's past coming back to haunt her it only means disaster because Craig will never let anyone have her. I can not wait to read more so please update again as soon as you can.June 15th, 2013 at 08:52pm
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I was wondering if Violet would see the similarities between herself and Amber. I am glad though that she is thinking of others than just herself. That is proof that she has changed. I wonder what happened with Zach and the rest of the band. I hope he comes to the realization that Amber is no good for him. Please update soon, I am hopelessly hooked to this story. On a side note, seeing that there was an update this morning totally made my birthday!June 15th, 2013 at 08:41pm
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OH no :(... VIOLET SAY SOMETHING YOU QUIET LITTLE THING YOU! These updates are getting to intense for me xD you are going to have to update more often!June 15th, 2013 at 08:14pm
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Poor Vi! I hope someone points out her being strange.June 15th, 2013 at 07:22pm
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Whoa, so many updates. I'm behind.
But I can't wait to delve more into Violet's past. Sounds like she has some demons in her closet.June 15th, 2013 at 04:19pm -
Oh dear lordy lord! This is some intense shizz nit! Violet really needs to tell somebody before she gets herself or someone else hurt! I would hate it if Craig some how gets his way and hurts her in any way shape or form :( but who knows, maybe Zack will come to the rescue or maybe one of the other guys? Any who, amazing writing! Job well done and pat on the shoulder for you. Shoot ill even throw in a high five! You my friend know how to keep your audience tuned in!June 15th, 2013 at 08:25am
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I love it! Update soon!June 15th, 2013 at 03:25am
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Dammit! I want to read more. It's getting so good and suspenseful and I'm fucking dying over here. I really hate when the chapter ends!! Has she never heard of a restraining order or is he that powerful of a man that it wouldn't matter? Why the fuck is Zacky so pussy whooped? He needs to stop acting like a little girl who's favorite barbie doll just broke and be a man.
Anyway, great chapter and I'm really looking forward to reading more.June 14th, 2013 at 08:40pm -
love this story hate vi tho shes really pisses me off and is going to have to do a lot of sucking up to do to make me like her cause shes being stupid and its annoying!June 14th, 2013 at 06:23pm
Please update soon xx