DO NOT change a thing! This is a great story and I am psyched to see that there's a sequel. I'm sure you know what you're doing, so stick with it! As soon as your sequel is posted, I'm recommending and subscribing, no matter what happens between this chapter and then. And as for Violet and Zack's relationship, I don't see what the issue is. They obviously love each other. Things can't always be sunshine and rainbows, haha! Can't wait for all that's to come!
I just read all 27 chapters today and i love your story so much. Every word, detail, and emotion iv gone through today..omg. im still trying to figure out how ill survive tell the next chapter comes. Amazing work and a heart filled congrats to your brother! please dont keep us waiting for to long.. <3
I love this, I love everything I'm so nervous about what Craig is gonna do. I have so many emotions about this story i don't know where to start. <3 can't wait for more
The things this story makes me feel man... I love how you portray Violet. Don't change a thing about her. I'm so excited for the sequel, but terrified to see what's going on with Craig. I'm literally bouncing around waiting for an update. Oh, and congratulations to your brother!
Well now that I've read this chapter I'm pissed at Violet! What the hell is she thinking??? This can only end badly... I know you said there would be a sequal but she is going to be even more damaged than she already is. Still pissed at Matt and Brian by the way, I hope you make them both eat shit for the crap they have pulled! They shouldn't have called her and told her what was going on, they should have known that Violet would go back to Craig to protect Zack. Please update soon, I'm sitting on the edge of my sitting wanting to know what is going to happen next!!!
I haven't read the chapter yet but I'm so glad that there is going to be a sequel. I love Zacky!!! I was afraid that you would be ending the story soon and with the way things are going between Violet and Zack, I just feel like it would be... closure, I guess is the word I'm looking for. I happen to like Violet but she was getting on my nerves by not telling Zack the truth about her past, however seeing the way he reacted I guess she had a valid reason for not talking about it. Glad to know that they are going to eventually be together.
So, I have to be honest, I found this story on Monday, I believe, and have been just kind of stalking the story for the last two updates. Well, I wanted to let you know, at least once since I suck at always commenting on stories that I read, that I fucking adore this. I love the way you develop your characters and how it all just flows so perfectly. I literally feel a burning rage when I think of Craig and all the injustice Violet's had to deal with, something I don't have happen very often with fanfictions. I honestly don't see how anyone can hate Violet unless they only choose to read certain parts of who she is and how she acts. I can honestly say I am excited for how this story will grow and how the sequel will continue it. <3
Jeez Matt is really being a douche about this!!!! At least jimmy and Dan are being nice. I hope Zacky is going to be okay!!! Looking forward to more :)
Matt is an asshole, I'm gonna beat the shit out of him if he keeps locking Zack away FROM HIS OWN FRIENDS. Dude, wtf? Jimmy and Leana are my favorite <3
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