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  • Heartluver

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    I can't wait for the next update and the sequel!
    June 28th, 2013 at 07:27pm
  • VandalizingTara

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    DO NOT change a thing! This is a great story and I am psyched to see that there's a sequel. I'm sure you know what you're doing, so stick with it! As soon as your sequel is posted, I'm recommending and subscribing, no matter what happens between this chapter and then. And as for Violet and Zack's relationship, I don't see what the issue is. They obviously love each other. Things can't always be sunshine and rainbows, haha! Can't wait for all that's to come!
    June 28th, 2013 at 06:19pm
  • fiction246

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    Really awesome!!! Craig needs to be taken down!!! Can't wait for more and I am looking forward to the sequel :)
    June 28th, 2013 at 10:22am
  • smo2cute

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    I just read all 27 chapters today and i love your story so much. Every word, detail, and emotion iv gone through today..omg. im still trying to figure out how ill survive tell the next chapter comes. Amazing work and a heart filled congrats to your brother! please dont keep us waiting for to long.. <3
    June 28th, 2013 at 07:34am
  • RazzyVengeance6661

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    I love this, I love everything I'm so nervous about what Craig is gonna do. I have so many emotions about this story i don't know where to start. <3 can't wait for more
    June 27th, 2013 at 10:23pm
  • Mockingbird;;

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    The things this story makes me feel man... I love how you portray Violet. Don't change a thing about her. I'm so excited for the sequel, but terrified to see what's going on with Craig. I'm literally bouncing around waiting for an update.
    Oh, and congratulations to your brother!
    June 27th, 2013 at 07:49am
  • fis12228

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    I'm so in love with this story! I can't stop checking for new updates! Keep it up, I can't wait to see how it ends and read the sequel. Smile
    June 27th, 2013 at 04:55am
  • Noblesse

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    A sequel would be awesome! Seems like we can't ever get enough of Violet and Zacky <33
    June 27th, 2013 at 03:56am
  • LadyRaven

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    Well now that I've read this chapter I'm pissed at Violet! What the hell is she thinking??? This can only end badly... I know you said there would be a sequal but she is going to be even more damaged than she already is. Still pissed at Matt and Brian by the way, I hope you make them both eat shit for the crap they have pulled! They shouldn't have called her and told her what was going on, they should have known that Violet would go back to Craig to protect Zack. Please update soon, I'm sitting on the edge of my sitting wanting to know what is going to happen next!!!
    June 27th, 2013 at 12:41am
  • LadyRaven

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    I haven't read the chapter yet but I'm so glad that there is going to be a sequel. I love Zacky!!! I was afraid that you would be ending the story soon and with the way things are going between Violet and Zack, I just feel like it would be... closure, I guess is the word I'm looking for. I happen to like Violet but she was getting on my nerves by not telling Zack the truth about her past, however seeing the way he reacted I guess she had a valid reason for not talking about it. Glad to know that they are going to eventually be together. Smile
    June 27th, 2013 at 12:26am
  • shortygirl

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    There's going to be a sequel! That sounds awesome. I don't have a problem Violet.
    She cant go back to Craig, he'll torture her.
    June 26th, 2013 at 11:55pm
  • vechkinfan1

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    This an amazing update! I love your writing, and I'm looking forward to see what happens next!
    June 26th, 2013 at 11:34pm
  • DreamingCorpse

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    Oh my god! This story... I love it so much!
    Fuck whoever doesn't like your characters, I love the way you portray everyone! This is amazing!
    June 26th, 2013 at 11:19pm
  • mindblind

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    So, I have to be honest, I found this story on Monday, I believe, and have been just kind of stalking the story for the last two updates. Well, I wanted to let you know, at least once since I suck at always commenting on stories that I read, that I fucking adore this. I love the way you develop your characters and how it all just flows so perfectly. I literally feel a burning rage when I think of Craig and all the injustice Violet's had to deal with, something I don't have happen very often with fanfictions. I honestly don't see how anyone can hate Violet unless they only choose to read certain parts of who she is and how she acts. I can honestly say I am excited for how this story will grow and how the sequel will continue it. <3
    June 26th, 2013 at 11:17pm
  • momma.bear99

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    I just found this story and I'm in love! Can't wait for the next update!(:
    June 26th, 2013 at 08:32pm
  • MrsChristX

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    :O loved it! cant wait to find out what happens! hope jimmy nd dan make them all see sense! love love this story! cant wait for more! xxx
    June 26th, 2013 at 04:09pm
  • fiction246

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    Jeez Matt is really being a douche about this!!!! At least jimmy and Dan are being nice. I hope Zacky is going to be okay!!! Looking forward to more :)
    June 26th, 2013 at 10:04am
  • uniqueluver20

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    I'm in love <3.<3 please keep writing :)
    June 26th, 2013 at 08:20am
  • Bunny-on-Drugs

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    jimmy is the shit and i love him! zack does need to move on to a girl who wont hide stuff from him like she does, its her own fault!
    June 26th, 2013 at 07:12am
  • Noblesse

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    Matt is an asshole, I'm gonna beat the shit out of him if he keeps locking Zack away FROM HIS OWN FRIENDS. Dude, wtf?
    Jimmy and Leana are my favorite <3

    Here in Brazil we make a candy called "brigadeiro" (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Brigadeiro). It's perfect for almost every ocasion, specially for those "broken heart nights" with movies and ice cream.
    June 26th, 2013 at 05:46am