Heartaches Knocking on Her Door - Comments

  • ilikewalls

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    Nice finish I loved that last line! "Branches break, leaves blow away, fires singe, sap flows, but a tree keeps growing." that needs to be on some kind of poster!
    August 8th, 2019 at 08:46am
  • Sweet_like_poison

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    Very nice chapter . Their reunion was so touching and also their dialogue under the Northern Lights . I found this beautiful : "He’d spotted her in the trees, looking around with wonder, otherworldly, just as she’d always been. She was the same in that respect, ethereal and lively; a forest nymph, But as she’d turned around he spotted the difference. It was in her eyes, the slightest difference there. Something he hadn’t immediately been able to put his finger on, until he finally realized, the tragedy, it was gone. The pain he’d once seen in those beautiful eyes no longer shone through like a knife among diamonds. He’d thought he was crazy, to see something like this, something others would never spot, but it was there nonetheless. To him she would always be that tragically beautiful young woman carried away on a gurney that fate compelled him to speak with "
    Needless to say , I can't wait for the next update. I know you are going to amaze me.
    July 1st, 2019 at 06:46pm
  • Sweet_like_poison

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    @ missdelioncourt

    I'll be here waiting. Smile Smile Smile
    June 21st, 2019 at 08:54pm
  • missdelioncourt

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    @ Sweet_like_poison
    I'm so happy that you've stuck it out! No this is not the end. When I decided to finally finish this story, as I was re-reading it and what I had already written for the ending, I realized that as I have loved and learned as the writer so too do I want the character to. There will be two more chapters coming up so that I can give this story a proper ending!
    June 21st, 2019 at 06:26pm
  • Sweet_like_poison

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    I had lost hope of seeing the story end, and when I got an update notification, I almost didn't believe it. But here is a new chapter and I'm so so happy. Beautifully written as always and even more . This is not the end, is it? Tell me that there will be an update soon . Thanks
    June 21st, 2019 at 05:32pm
  • andysgirl

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    Please update!
    February 8th, 2018 at 04:20am
  • missdelioncourt

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    I'M SORRY FOR HAVING NO UPDATES AND BEING SO SHITTY I LOVE YOU ALL
    December 26th, 2017 at 05:53am
  • FallyVengeance.

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    You shattered my soul with no update.

    All I picture is theirbroken hearts in the streets of Helsinki.

    I am so sad please. Update if you hAve one
    November 17th, 2017 at 05:35am
  • LostInReality23

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    Update this! Please! I've been doing nothing but reading this story for the past two days! It is beyond amazing! I can't even put into words! I read alot of fanfiction,... but this....this is on a completely different level. I have never read something written as well as this. No book, story, or fanfiction has ever had me quite like this. Update it please, I'm dying to know what happened!!
    March 22nd, 2016 at 08:14am
  • ducky7

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    No final chapter??
    June 27th, 2015 at 05:57am
  • Sweet_like_poison

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    what a pity that this great story has no conclusion
    May 26th, 2015 at 12:26pm
  • Sweet_like_poison

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    May 26th, 2015 at 12:24pm
  • missdelioncourt

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    The goal is this week! Gah I've been so nervous about this chapter!
    January 7th, 2015 at 05:06am
  • skam_devil

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    Please update soon.
    January 6th, 2015 at 02:02pm
  • missdelioncourt

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    Still one chapter! Which I'm anxious for everyone to read
    December 28th, 2014 at 07:32pm
  • ducky7

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    Oh man so sad.....I'm more sad for Ville though, not her. She made me mad in the last few chapters for some reason. LOL. Hell of a story- best one I've read in a loooooooong time.
    December 28th, 2014 at 09:33am
  • karolaina

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    Love it, please update!
    November 28th, 2014 at 08:18pm
  • missdelioncourt

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    Update coming next month!! thank you everyone for the patience!
    November 22nd, 2014 at 06:11pm
  • tiffanyinwonderland

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    Just read this in 2days... love it and please update
    November 22nd, 2014 at 11:15am
  • Kit_Kat_KiTtY69

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    omfg she is sooo ughhh i cant
    October 3rd, 2014 at 10:49am