Nice finish I loved that last line! "Branches break, leaves blow away, fires singe, sap flows, but a tree keeps growing." that needs to be on some kind of poster!
Very nice chapter . Their reunion was so touching and also their dialogue under the Northern Lights . I found this beautiful : "He’d spotted her in the trees, looking around with wonder, otherworldly, just as she’d always been. She was the same in that respect, ethereal and lively; a forest nymph, But as she’d turned around he spotted the difference. It was in her eyes, the slightest difference there. Something he hadn’t immediately been able to put his finger on, until he finally realized, the tragedy, it was gone. The pain he’d once seen in those beautiful eyes no longer shone through like a knife among diamonds. He’d thought he was crazy, to see something like this, something others would never spot, but it was there nonetheless. To him she would always be that tragically beautiful young woman carried away on a gurney that fate compelled him to speak with " Needless to say , I can't wait for the next update. I know you are going to amaze me.
@ Sweet_like_poison I'm so happy that you've stuck it out! No this is not the end. When I decided to finally finish this story, as I was re-reading it and what I had already written for the ending, I realized that as I have loved and learned as the writer so too do I want the character to. There will be two more chapters coming up so that I can give this story a proper ending!
I had lost hope of seeing the story end, and when I got an update notification, I almost didn't believe it. But here is a new chapter and I'm so so happy. Beautifully written as always and even more . This is not the end, is it? Tell me that there will be an update soon . Thanks
Update this! Please! I've been doing nothing but reading this story for the past two days! It is beyond amazing! I can't even put into words! I read alot of fanfiction,... but this....this is on a completely different level. I have never read something written as well as this. No book, story, or fanfiction has ever had me quite like this. Update it please, I'm dying to know what happened!!
Oh man so sad.....I'm more sad for Ville though, not her. She made me mad in the last few chapters for some reason. LOL. Hell of a story- best one I've read in a loooooooong time.