Heartaches Knocking on Her Door - Comments

Oh jeeeez, what an Amazing chapter. I nedd more please! Like...now!

It finally happened ! I knew it the second I read the word "car" haha. So, is the turning point of the story ? I mean, when I read the prologue and the first chapters all I wanted to know was how it ended up with that tragic episode and now that we know and that it happened, I just can't imagine what's next. That's good though, but my curiosity and my desire to discover more and more of this story are just simply slowly killing me haha !

What a chapter! What a big surprise , I never thought that Tyler was looking for a revenge against Ville. Beautifully written as always , so much pathos , I felt like I was Liv . I can't wait for the next chapter , I guess it will be in Ville's POV , can only imagine his feelings , he will be broken . But I'm sure she's going to recover. Once again , you didn't miss the target. Best HIM fanfiction ever and I have read a lot of them :)

you almost make me cry, i'm hoping she doesn't die, she can't die, they can't end up just like that!!!! excelente chapter but it makes really hard to wait for the next one.

no no no no!!! you can't leave it there!!

omfg no no no oh my god.

wait...what?! wtf just happened?! AAAHHH update soon please....

Thanks for the most desired Christmas present . I'm going to read the chapter as soon as possible and give you a proper comment. In the meanwhile Merry Christmas!

Omg!! I hope she lives and he finds out and feels horrible for everything he did and said!!! Please update again soon, I absolutely love your story!!!!

I hope he finds out about everything and feels really fucking guilty. I hope she lives please update soon!

Uh oh! She better live and they need to be back together!!!! Post again soon. I love it.

OMG!!!!! you just give me the best christmas present today :) thank for the update... am going to read it right now!

@Death's Love It honestly makes me so happy that you're so angry with Ville, as weird as that sounds, I mean, I'd love for readers to sympathize with the characters. Things are just gonna get worse unfortunately, it's just kinda all downhill, but hopefully you like the chapter. As for the ending, I know what'll happen, but don't wanna say if it'll be happy or not :P Haha yes! You noticed! I've been trying to make it get across that they do have the same temperaments which makes it that much more difficult for them if there are misunderstandings.
@BuryMeInWhite OH GOSH! The drama! Just you wait for chapter 22 :O I've been slowly trying to build up for the shit show that's gonna happen in chapter 22. I hope you like the chapter cause it has exactly what you wonder, the two finally face eachother, DUN DUN DUN
@Sweet_like_poison I've been trying to make the last couple of chapters like, like blowing up a balloon, if that makes sense, and there's more and more and more pressure as it gets bigger and bigger, until it pops, the balloon popping is gonna happen in this next chapter, so I look forward to hearing what you think of the chapter!

A good chapter indeed , you know how to keep the reader under pressure . I don't want to make any prediction about what is happening next , I want to be surprised . :)

Oh my God, Ville is frustrating me so much how can he be so stupid ?! When he will realise his big stupid mistakes he'll be so miserable, I can already smell the scent of drama from there ! I feel like all the misunderstandings and little fights they had are nothing compared to what wil happen when they will actually meet up for more than 5 seconds and all the things that hadn't been told will suddenly burst out haha.

Oh my god. Your story is literallly killing me. I feel like my heart is going to explode from all the pain that I'm feeling. If Ville would stop being a selfish ass for five seconds and realize how much pain she's in, then he'd realize that he's being a selfish ass! Anyway, I would really enjoy a happy ending. I know that a lot more stuff is going to come that's going to be really bad but I just want Ville to grow up and I want Liv to stop being so selfish. They both have the same temperments which isn't working for them! Please update soon! :D

@Devil's Advocate Haha oh gosh, yeah, Ville's being quite an ass, no one's perfect right? Ohh, I like the way you think, but don't worry, I have something far more dramatic in mind for a later chapter, just you wait! :) I really want you guys to wonder if they will actually be together or not, I'm quite the masochistic writer :/
@katherinewheel I'm glad you can see where Ville was coming from in this past chapter, cause I mean, no matter the age difference, everyone has insecurities right? He'll realize, but too late (take that how you will) Haha I've had other readers tell me they suspect Mige knows already, maybe he does, maybe he doesn't :P you won't find out till later unfortunately. and also sorry sorry for the lateness of this coming chapter!
@sweet_like_poison Sorry if my replies are short, I tend to reply right before I update and usually I'm just so darn excited to update I tend to rush through my replies to all the lovely comments, my apologies. Unfortunately the misunderstandings are only going to get worse in this next chapter :/
@BuryMeInWhite Oh gosh thank you! So much! I feel like sometimes I'm really inconsistent with my chapters, sometimes I rush, sometimes I go too slow, some are good and jam packed with descriptions and some are mediocre at best, but it makes me really happy to hear you love the story in its entirety!
@skam_devil Thank you! The next update is finally hear! yay!
@ducky7 Sadly the unfortunate events are just going to continue from here :/ I mean, I can't just let things be all happy and cheery all the time right? The misunderstandings and the avoidance of confrontation all sort of stems from insecurities, on both their part, and hopefully that comes through in chapter 21. I hope the situation you were in eventually got better! And the update is here, finally.
Kit_Kat_KiTtY69 Yes! That's kind of the point, but things can get carried away, as you'll see in the next chapter, and then everything escalates to the big shit show that happens in chapter 22 :O
@mandyas87 Update is here at last! My sincerest apologies for it's lateness. It's not a really exciting chapter, at all, but I'll up for it in chapter 22, promise

please update! x

omg you need to update this that main character tho she is soo childish she should grow some balls and show him she doesn't need him that she can be on her own maybe then he would see that he effed up!

Damn. Double damn. This is like a series of unfortunate events unfolding, one after the next. I think she needs to grow a set of balls and make him fess up...lol. But, I feel bad for her. I've been in that place where the person you love treats you and acts as though you don't exist. It's very hurtful and miserable to experience. I'm disappointed that he was so rude to her on the phone....it's not as if she's one of those whiny and over emotional girls that cling to him 24/7. She is emotional, but that's just because she's insecure and doesn't really understand where he's coming from. That man needs to sit her down and tell her like it is and give her some reassurance, instead of sneaking looks at the letter she wrote him. Anxiously awaiting an update!!!